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BAH! i love this story >_< u must post a new chappie soon~~~

Oh now that’s just not nice! I thought I was going to get some smut in this chapter, and seeing as you were extremely cruel in “Sound of Dreams”, ending the last chapter just as the smut was getting started, one would think that you would at least give us a little something in the second chapter of what is now going to be a four-shot. I suppose though after an extremely sexy first chapter, one has to do something to “build the suspense”. Anyway, all I’m really saying is that I loved this chapter as well, even if there wasn’t any smut. I especially like the line “He was shocked, he was confused and he was as hard as a quantum physics thesis.”-a wonderful analogy that totally set the tone for the chapter as well as the mood. Anyway though, just a quick, or not so quick note. My best wishes for you and your writing.

AWWWWW....Kiba is such a cool friend. *Sighes*...I want someone like him!

Tanksya for the update! I really enjoy reading your writing style. You're truly talented me' lassie!

Ja na,
Severedwings

You are awesome and that's final!

This is really good so far.

Good moment:
Sasuke's hitch in his breathing when Naruto was confessing to 'him.' *Loved it!!!*

Keep it up. I look forward to more.

Ja!

even though i always am looking for an update of the soundof dreams i don't mind an interuption for a very good reason. i consider this bombin story a very good reason. i can't wait for your next update of either story.

ooh..i wasn't expecting the chapter to end this way. interesting. i got to say, my favorite scene was Sasuke's pouting cock. That was pure genius =D

That was good! Sasuke sitting there and thinking of naruto's words also trying to deny it was nice - and the part where he thinks of naruto's size.
Also it was interesting when he thought that naruto was a happy, sunny person with a perfect past.

i do hope you write some more! i like this twist to the Naruto world!

Wow - I think you're brilliant!!! I loved the first chapter it was fantastic and Naruto was sexy as hell on that phone call - but when he found out it was Sasuke on the 1st hp I was like O_O kIBA IS SO EVIL HEHE but I loved it. And now the 2nd chp was really nicely done as well, I liked the way you wrote Sasuke's POV and his thoughts just screamed of 'Sasuke'. Anywya, it was great so I'll shut up now.

Hope you update soon!

Ja!
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