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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person mimi
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
until you finish this story, your days will be numbered.............

ah, just kidding. heehee. great job. that was certainly a little twist there, in having Sasuke's POV. please continue soon!!!!
person celticfx
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo, i'm glad to see you're continuing it to 4 chapters. how will sasuke approach naruto? i can't wait to see! ^_^
person Xenobia
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!!!!! I love this...and I'm dying to get the next chapters.

Love, luck & lollipops!
person Tepee712
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and so the story continues, I wonder How will they get together! Good job so far!
person Hello
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Kiba seemed to try to get him with Sasuke... interesting.
person Zannie
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOHO! Three shot! Keep it going, strike while the fires of youth are hot hot hot! (strikes a crazy pose) Update soon m'kay?
person animehead
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Now I have to write extra fast so I can update my story soon!

Anyway, I don't think I can tell you how much I love this story, but please believe I do! My favorite line: "He was shocked, he was confused and he was as hard as a quantum physics thesis." I just love it!

You must be my seme! I won't take no for an answer! LOL

Okay, okay, okay...I'm going back to writing now! I wasn't planning on putting in "real" smut in the next chapter of "You're Mine", although, I do have a little SaiHaku in there, but now I feel like I have to add some to express my happiness with this story...LOL (getting long-winded now) Bye
person MsKeller
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome,awesome story! You've got me totally hooked. I can't wait the see the next chapter.
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe guys fighting in a locker room is fucking hot mwhaha! wow....naruto is so in denial, i found that cute in a way ^_^ pounce Sasuke pounce like a tiger in the wild!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is soooooooooooo going in my fav's!!! I just...LOVE IT! I was like speechless when first reading this!! Awesome chapter girly! Please keep writing!!!