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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person eater of cupcakes
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was awesome!! i was glued to my screen, desperately hoping it wouldn't end, but sadly it did.....so hurry up and update!!...please...your work is too good to havta wait.
person VRon8899
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm. I love this story, I hope you keep it up!!!!! Or I will very sad -tear- :_____(
person seraphym
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! So good! You're able to get inside both of their heads so well. I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Please update soon!!!!
person kaa-san
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great! That call was a whole lot better than the one I got one night. LOL. I like this one alot. It's hot.
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg update!! does it have to be a two shot? why not a tthree shot or something?? gosh i love this story as much as the sound of dreams....please update both soon!!
person fnw
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Make it a two-shot! I'm so glad that Naruto just -can't- help but think of Sasuke, even though he's in coughlovecough with Sakura...
Two-shot! Two-shot! Please? Awesome writing!
person fnw
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
P.S. - can Sasuke be uke? Please? Pwetty pwease? *o*
person sapphirexkat2
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU F***IN GENIUS CONTINUE OR ELSSSSSSSSE!!!!11!!

nicely dones, btw. oooooh, I can't WAIT to read more.
person Godsx
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's awesome! Great idea - continue please!
Meow bets that sasuke wouldn't be able to resist naruto's pouty mouth!
person darktoy
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Poor naruto, Kiba is a real jackass!!!!!
And now, is up to Sasuke.... And poor Naru-chan will be having a lot of trouble...

YAY!!!!! I loved it!