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by Zrina

person Hello
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this, the ending made me giggle, even if I knew that was your intention. Ahh, can't wait for what happens. :p
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heehee! kiba did it on purpose!! ^_^ he was thinking about a dream about sasuke (or whoever's on the line, but it's probably sasuke), wasn't he??? *childish giggling* YAY!! please update soon!!~
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, actually, as much as I enjoy "Sound of Dreams" that was a rather interesting plot bunny indeed. In fact I wouldn't mind in the least (since it is only supposed to be a two-shot) if you finished this little fic before you updated the next chapter of the above mentioned fic. It was rather sexy and I'm very interested to see where things go from here for our little blonde. Anyway though, just wanted to let you know that this was great. My best wishes for you and your writing.
person TalkingButterfly
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good, good! ^_^ Funny little piece. I'd love to read the continuation!
person fluffy_cloud
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahahahaha!! that's a good one. i wonder what will happen to all of them. please continue!! ^^
person Kim
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And wheres my more? I really interested in reading the next bit. :D Please write the rest (or post it... or write and post it) soon!
person oraday
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo... This chapter ended too early. I must have more!!! MORE!!! Wah, Kiba's a genius. I really loved how this worked out. Hm... Sounds like Sasuke's gonna be uke... Mind having them switch it up at least?

I just want to read more of this. It's really a great situation and I like the hints you give of Naruto obviously liking Sasuke... Ah, the whole thing was awesome^.^
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahah AWESOME!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! This would make a *killer* two-shot, so long as part two is completely smutty, because this looks like it could lead up to something *great* :D I hope you go with that, since I can't wait for the next part! I wish I could know Sasuke's POV, lol, that would probably be really funny. Anyways, here's hoping for smex, and soon! *is perverted and proud* this was a wonderful little tease, good job! ^_^
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING! I wanna see this come true :D