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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person YaoiLicious
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
ENTERTAINING!!!!
ENCORE!!!!!!
This was a very deserving fic...
I really enjoyed it...It was highly
amusing and fun to read....I'm off to
your other fic now...
KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING!!!!
person charmpit
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent! Delightful.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha funny wow that just cracked me up, turned me on and made me lose another hour of sleep...damn it girl you're dangerous...I can't read a story of your's without dying to finish it and then I end up at 4 am on some ungodly amazing part of your story and realize 'well fuck i have to get up and go to work/school in like an hour...

Well love it anyway, as for something constructive you kind of made Sasuke ooc but I didn't care or mind. I loved your lemon as usual but maybe you could have a scene where Naruto does get topped. Anyway I like the diversity of your description and how you kept everyone mostly in character. Anyway I'm going to saunter off get some sleep... etc then be back to finish up your stories.

Love =^.*=
person Taylor
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aawww! That was absolutely adorable. Sasuke is such a hard worker! XD

AWesome job! Keep up the awesome work!
*high five*
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Had to keep from laughing out loud on this one and causing a ruckus! My favorite part was:

"Wowlookatthetime! Gottagoseeya!" Naruto said in a breathless rush before bolting for the nearest exit.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was so sweet at the end. Don't know whether it's the fact that I'm feverish and ill, but I became a little sentimental back there.
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Oh cosmos! Anyone but Sakura! I would have rather it been Kiba instead, he would have never let Sasuke live it down, but at least he would have laughed it off! Still, I very much enjoyed this fic. Calmed me down after freaking out about chapter 11 of Blackmail and Betrayal.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*happy squeal* You don't know how happy I am after reading only the first chapter of this fic! I don't even admit to squealing at all, but it was there! A silent *squee* of happiness that I barely managed to keep silent at such a late hour of the night (ironically like the setting of the first chapter too...).
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The only thing I'm going to say is that if you're interested, you better do something about it. If not, then stay the hell away from him." With that, the other boy picked up his gym bag and stalked out of the room.

--Oh heeeeeell yes! Damn straight Kiba! Tell it like it is! I can't EXPRESS how much I've enjoyed reading this fic so far (and only at chapter 2!)...
person Mazzer
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol! Oh no! Sakura really will stalk him forever now! XD That was a great fic, the dating advice made me cring though - especially the hair one, oh Sasuke! XD Thanks for writing!