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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person nameless/soul
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*clap* I got such a good laugh out of this fic, nicly done!
person Adi
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers*

You're not even here and you're distracting me, I just read all the other chapters in my ten minute break which somehow turned into an hour break.

God I love this story, I'm so glad I read it ages ago, so that rereading felt all new and stuff. *dies from smut and laughter overload*

but the "so neither one of us with ever be alone again" line made me go all aww and gah, dammit it's all too cute hot and funny XD

*LOVE*
person Adi
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. I can't seem to revise XD anywho, I thought I'd reread an old favourite, I just read the first chapter again, and I was smirking the entire time, then it got all hot and heavy, and I started holding my breath until I turned blue. God woman, you really know how to write *deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep breath* XD

*cough* back to revision now -__-
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was hilarious! Maybe Sasuke should have paid more attention to the phone. If I loved someone and wanted to call them and was planning on having phone sex, I would make sure I was calling the right person. Maybe he shouldn't have let the popcorn burning distract him. Now Naruto's probably going to be thoroughly pissed off. Great story. In the beginning, maybe Sasuke should have realized it was better just to be himself and to say what he would really mean and want to say. Some of that advice was kind of weird, and I don't think it would have worked out the same given Naruto and Sasuke's earlier relationship and given it was a guy going for another guy, not a girl going for a guy.
person El-Gilliath
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is the most perfect ending. OMG, you so need to write a sequel where Naruto gets pissed
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, the last chapter, hillarious! I too would be scared if I was Sasuke. I'm looking forward to more of your stories!
person Kyuubi-Kun
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA!
that is so funny
sakura probably had a massive nosebleed and died of blood loss by now
kukuku
sasuke is in troubleeeeee

JA NE!
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil! That ending was pure evil!

Great laugh though.
person Kerrisa
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! THAT WAS HILLARIOUS!!! Oh my gosh what an awesome end to a great piece of fiction!! I had no idea this fic even existed until i clicked ur name on accident when i went to leave a review for SoD. GYAH I LOVED IT! I dont think i've ever had such a hard time trying to hide my smiles or delight. Lol it wouldn't be too nice to have one of my family members ask what had me so delightfully giddy now would it? Well i loved it i loved it i loved it and if you ever strayed away from SoD to get rid of another lil plot bunny i would not be upset!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...*hugs you to death* I LOVE this fic! I LOVED the ending! And the hot and steamy stuff was truely hot and steamy! (realizes he's using a lot of '!'s but can't help himself because this fic is truely awesome!)