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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person MeLaiya
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, Ok really I so saw that ending coming a decade away but reguardless, it was too cute. Keep up the good work and update soon.
person bunnicle
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, god! you have got to do a sequel on this one! That ending was just priceless! You can just imagine the look of devistating horror on Sasuke's face! lol! oh, *gasp* you have GOT to do a sequel! I'll simply die if you don't! *gets down on knees and gives Zrina big watery puppy eyes* pleeeeaaassse! *lower lip quivers*
person Stank You
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiba is such an asshole but a genius; I just like how he thought he was pouring his heart out to Sakura but he was thinking about Sasuke, sexually.
person bluewow
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I’m not sure if I should be laughing hysterically or incredibly turned on.
What a fantastic combination!
Phone sex! XD
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! The ending was perfect I tell you! Perfect! Keep up the good work!
person Allys
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... Okay where to start just read chapter 4, and Oh My... *Sigh* I should have known :). That was fan-fucking-tastic, everything you ever promised and so much more. I'm so freaking happy right, I'm floating too. Started out funny, got a little heart-clenching in the middle after the date, moving toward HOTTT!! and on to the sweetest thing ever, that little mini ending was adorable. Honestly you could have left it there and that would've rocked my world, not that I will EVER complain about another chapter. So onward to that.
person Allys
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snicker, snort* LOL, OKay, that was Really unexpected O.o,,, XD *chuckles* Sigh you had me all excited for a moment there too I was all EXTRA SMUT!!! WOOT!!! But LOL that was hilarious enough as it is anyway. Oh and I forgot to say earlier, HIP HIP!!! The bastard finally Shut his brain UP and got down to some Sucking!!!! LOL and to think that I was ready to swat him earlier, I take it all back. *Showers the Author with Flowers* @--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---@--'-,---
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, oh now that was funny. I had a feeling that when Sasuke called “Naruto” that it wouldn’t be him. I wasn’t surprised that it was Sakura on the other line because by having it be her it would complete the original love triangle thus making the story come full circle. I really enjoyed this short fic (well, short compared to your other works), and I encourage you to explore your ideas like you did with this story. I am confident that I would enjoy whatever it is you have to offer us readers. My best wishes for you and your writing.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! What a great ending! Poor Sasuke!! I loved the lemon in the last chapter too. Too bad you didn't write the lemon where Sasuke topped, but it made sense to end this story the way you did. Great story! :)
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it went from hot, to funny, to nosebleed hot :D great!! although I havent read the last chapter yet lol