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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person Anon
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it went from hot, to funny, to nosebleed hot :D great!! although I havent read the last chapter yet lol
person chupa chan
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story was so awesome...
while reading it i was breaking down into fits of giggles ^^
keep it up! XD
person kaa-san
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! This story is just soooo funny!
Sasuke taking dating advice from the internet? how lame can a guy get?
and the last part; OMG! Poor Sasuke
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFF (rolling on the fucking floor) THAT WAS HILARIOUS!#@~! *dies at the last two sentences* *repeatedly*

Gawd, you are an amazing writer cuz that fic is one of the awesomest fics of all time~ !!! *squee*
Phonesex AND NaruSasu -- could it get any better?? Oh yeah (it could!) PLUS /Kiba/ of all people hookin' them up in the first place (with the very first phonesex call to begin with -- it was practically all his idea!!!) and of course helping them along the way -- if it hadn't been for him, they might never have gotten together at all [READ: Date-advice from Kiba, Dr. Love]

Anyway there's prolly heaps more I want to say but I can't think of right now (still incoherent from teh smex and hilarity] but, so much love, just, so much much love... ¢¾¢¾¢¾
person Tepee712
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha lol priceless ending. Good job!
person b
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hysterical..hot..perfect really. The end was really scary.
person TsukiUchiha666
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM

this is how much i liked this fic... I tried to login to post under my actual penname here on Aff.net. And I couldnt... And i really wanted to post under my actual ID... And I spent the last half hour trying to login...

And finally decided to just review. Somethign I haven't done in SO long.

BUT, this fic deserved it. It was just too funny and too shocking someties the things that happened. And at the very end, i couldn't stop laughing. Beautiful job. I also am in love with the Sound of Dreams. You're a good writer.

I'm waiting for another update on that story of course!
person Total Truth
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww I loved this. I laughed so hard at Sasuke at the end. I love your stories, they are absolutely great!
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was sooooo much fun to read. Sasuke's cluelessness and the way he *actually followed* the dating advice meant for girls was hilarious. What a disastrous date!

The hot sexing in chapter 4 was just... yum.

I will be reading The Sound of Dreams very soon.
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, the ending was fitting I think loool, but you almost made me choke with the restaurat scene. I was eating lol when I read the bit where Naruto said the slime thing it was hilarious loool. Nice, I thought it was a good fic! Thanks for posting it.

Ja! xXxx