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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so i wrote a super long review this morning BEFORE ANYONE ELSE HAD REVIWED and then aff.net decided it was their "daily moment of downtime" and my review got lost in cyberspace and it was sad and stuff :( and i couldnt write another one till now because i was gonna be late for work, and i had yet to brush my teeth (see how far reading your fic is on my priority list? XD)
aww it sucks you're ill!! BUT YAY YOU UPDATED WITH SMUT!!!! and the funniest epilogue in the history of epilogues XD
thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!
:D
aww it sucks you're ill!! BUT YAY YOU UPDATED WITH SMUT!!!! and the funniest epilogue in the history of epilogues XD
thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!
:D
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I feel complete! ::glomps Zrina:: This was a wonderful, hilarious, sexy, little story. I'm so happy you wrote it. Poor Sasuke, calling Sakura at the end! LOL! Awesome. Just plain awesome!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:GAK:...that was...so MEAN! Arg...poor Sasuke-kun! You are a verra mean mean author goddess. BUT, I must say...I didn't see that coming. Way to go!
Thanks ya for finishing this!
Ja,
SW
Thanks ya for finishing this!
Ja,
SW
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how did i know that was coming? ^.^ this was a great story! quite humorous. when you finally finish Sound of Dreams, you should totally do another comedy. till next time!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHA that was fricken awesome! <333 wonderful story!!!!!!! Best ever! ^_________^ i don't know what else to say! But you rock! :P I could go on babbling about how great you are for writing this fic and how great the fic was, but it'd be the same thing over and over :P
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the perfect ending! XDDD
I can't stop laughing!
I can't stop laughing!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was perfect. it couldn't have ended better. 20++++++++ stars. good job.~
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, that was awesome, this story was great. so hot, yet hilarious at the same time. i sorta really like how sasuke's plans for their first date bombed. i like thinking that, even though he's hot, he doesn't really know what he's doing. so many people often assume that just because he's *sasuke* he'll be perfect with everything, but really i don't always see sasuke as great with human interactions like "wooing" and dating.
so, getting to the actual reviews for these last 2 chapters: the date was funny, it was another one of those nail biting, wanting to watch through my fingers things, almost on par with sasuke following the "dating advice" (but not quite, lol, idk WHAT can compare to that XD) also, it's cute how, once again, kiba had to step in to get things on the right track. and when sasuke was putting his bags on the table and explaining what everything was, i giggled when he said "alcohol" and "alcohol's friend"--that was cute. it sorta felt like a comparison between him and naruto to me, too. like how, at the restaurant, he had wine and naruto had cherry coke--it seemed like THEM. oh yeah, and i giggled at sasuke saying "you bet my sweet ass" (lol, instead of "your sweet ass"--was he already implying he would bottom or was he just being sasuke :p either way, it was cute and funny)
and after all that, omg, the sex was HAWTTTTTT; omg, i so love uke sasuke >.> i love them both, but gahhh sasUKE is SO HOT!! like when sasuke was giving naru head and naru said "fuck, sasuke!" and he paused to say "yes, please." *drool, nosebleed* also, it was refreshing that they used a condom.
and then: "So, what do we do now?" Naruto asked softly.
"We fall asleep together. And in the morning, we wake up together," Sasuke said just as quietly.
"So that neither one of us will ever be alone again," Naruto finished with a tender smile.
omg, that's so sweeeet! nice bit o' fluff mixed with all the *funny* and *hot* ^______^
and then, the epilogue!! omg, i saw it coming, but it still cracked me the hell up. as soon as he started doing the same thing naruto had done to begin with, and got distracted by the burning popcorn, i knew he was dialing sakura's number. lmaoooooo omg, greatness. great job, fucking awesome. you rock my socks
~ lg
so, getting to the actual reviews for these last 2 chapters: the date was funny, it was another one of those nail biting, wanting to watch through my fingers things, almost on par with sasuke following the "dating advice" (but not quite, lol, idk WHAT can compare to that XD) also, it's cute how, once again, kiba had to step in to get things on the right track. and when sasuke was putting his bags on the table and explaining what everything was, i giggled when he said "alcohol" and "alcohol's friend"--that was cute. it sorta felt like a comparison between him and naruto to me, too. like how, at the restaurant, he had wine and naruto had cherry coke--it seemed like THEM. oh yeah, and i giggled at sasuke saying "you bet my sweet ass" (lol, instead of "your sweet ass"--was he already implying he would bottom or was he just being sasuke :p either way, it was cute and funny)
and after all that, omg, the sex was HAWTTTTTT; omg, i so love uke sasuke >.> i love them both, but gahhh sasUKE is SO HOT!! like when sasuke was giving naru head and naru said "fuck, sasuke!" and he paused to say "yes, please." *drool, nosebleed* also, it was refreshing that they used a condom.
and then: "So, what do we do now?" Naruto asked softly.
"We fall asleep together. And in the morning, we wake up together," Sasuke said just as quietly.
"So that neither one of us will ever be alone again," Naruto finished with a tender smile.
omg, that's so sweeeet! nice bit o' fluff mixed with all the *funny* and *hot* ^______^
and then, the epilogue!! omg, i saw it coming, but it still cracked me the hell up. as soon as he started doing the same thing naruto had done to begin with, and got distracted by the burning popcorn, i knew he was dialing sakura's number. lmaoooooo omg, greatness. great job, fucking awesome. you rock my socks
~ lg
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully done! I'm so glad you finished, and this story was perfect until the end. thanks so much for this! great job and I hope you continue to write more!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god, this was so much fun!!! poor poor sasuke!! gah i feel so bad for him!! idiot should check the number....i wonder what naruto will do!! see ya soon ja ne!
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