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for Just this Once

by Sephy

schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic! One of my favorite Kabu/Oro stories so far.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O kabuto......on....top.....*nosebleed*......niiiiiiiiiice
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...KabuOro...I don't get to see that one much. I love it! So perfectly executed! I was wondering how you would pull this off when I read the summary and oh you did so well! I have ADD so I usually leave a story in the middle then come back to it later to finish but I couldn't stop reading! ...is it sad that I felt bad of the tea pot XD...*shrugs* oh well...anywho ^_^ Great job!
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never would have expected this!! Orochimaru as uke? Wow! What a pleasant surprise. I feel a little sorry for Kabuto though, that he'll never get to be top again. Aww.

There were a few gramaticall errors near the beginning which made it seem a little sketchy but everything cleaned up nicely as you read along. Good work.