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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaah.......... good stuff. Keep it up.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was really short for as long as it took to updte it seems you could have had 7 or 8 chapters done how short they are oh well just update soon please
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought that chapter was cool but I just wish you would update much sooner just kidding i`m just bored of looking for Naruto stories to read while the waiting and waiting for the really good stories to finally get updated so please update sooner because I like this story so far
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I like how everything is set. But the only thing I don't like is the format of the conversations. I don't understand some of the things that happened. And now the girls know that Naruto is the vessel of the Kyuubi. Hinata still cares for him but Sakura goes and hurts him so bad that Kyuubi takes control over him and makes things go a lil crazy please clear the conversations up a lil and please continue...
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, Comrade
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are right Samurai is to serve. But they didn't show women as Samurais but there were a few great women Samurais. I don't remember the names but I do have a bit of Japanese background. I hope you keep the culture to it as close as possible about the Samurais and all. Keep up with your writings and why does Naruto have to have a keeper
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I guess this story is ok still wondering who this guy is and also why are the guys not allowed in the compound oh well please update soon
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Your story is a lil out of it. Sakura seems different. Ichiraku's and plus your story jumps from out of nowhere. Tell us what mission and who is Yamatto. Why did Naruto end up in the hospital and what happened between Naruto and Hinata. and is Sakura alone or is she with Yamatto.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
Kinda nice to see someone elses view of the characters. I always like to see new ways to portray the favorite Naruto characters.
Kinda nice to see someone elses view of the characters. I always like to see new ways to portray the favorite Naruto characters.