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Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

This is really good.
I like the 'feel' of this story. You put a lot of emotion in the writing and that really draws me in.
Keep it up and I hope that you update soon!^^

mmm i like rehab and psych ward AUs the best, for some twisted reason. maybe it's a desire not to end up in either, though ive gotten close a couple times *sweatdrop*

anyways, good show so far, i'd love to see who else's life your gonna fuck up before bringing them all together. mmm, they ARE gonna end up in rehab together, right? 0.0

this is very good so far. looking foward to reading more

wow. that was very deep. and deep in a good way. and good job with that original character. not only did she not come off being so very obtrusive and mary-sue-ish (which i absolutely detest) and you did job integrating her into the story.

i am very curious to see how this story progresses, it's holding me quite interested (and i do so hope i won't have to wait four months before a new update appears... *hint, hint*)

i really enjoy the angst, the very delicious angst that is delivered here, and i can't wait to read more about the back story of naruto and sasuke. i really hope this ends with them together as i'm a huge naru/sasu fangirl (can you imagine!) anyways, i'm particularly fond of the way you're writing out the characters and their behavior while addicted. it helps give us, the readers, a look into why they should seek help, why their loved ones and lovers are eager to help them.

keep it up and please, update soon! (email me when you do?)
~hanyou-elf

hey sweety!! long time no see. i like this fic....i want to see where it goes, so please update soon!! how have you been other than that? i wonder where sasuke comes into this...anyway see you when you update!! ja ne!
Taka

*takes off glasses and fluffs hair*

*glances around to make sure roommate is asleep*

*clears throat*

SQUEE! OH WOW THIS IS REALLY INTERESTING AND COOL!! I LIKE THAT YOU ARE INCLUDING SAI AND STUFF! But poor Naru-chan!! T_T That's so sad and what is he addicted to, and is some pretty bishie gonna come and save him from himself (coughSASUKEcough)???

OMFG like you need to update and really quick and stuff!!

^_^

*ahem*

*puts glasses back on*

*pulls hair back in ponytail*

Damn, I hate it when that happens...well don't be scared by my inner-fangirl escaping. I hope to see an update relatively soon. Continue to watch for spelling errors and your use of present participles (-ing verbs). There were a couple of places where you were using -ing verbs when you needed to use just a regular past tense. You also have a habit of switching letters in a word around. Like I know in one of your fics you wrote easers--context of the sentence indicates you meant erases. No biggie, but if your working on your writing skills (which aren't bad currently), I just thought I'd let you know. You won't hear about grammar from me again unless you WANT to hear about it.

La de da. I'm out of things to say.

here's your review

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wow. this looks like it's going to be an amazing story. i really can not wait to see what you have planned for this story. you've offered a prologue that does its job beautifully. you pique the reader's curiosity with the poetry of your words and you draw the reader into the story with the depth of emotion flowing within each paragraph. great job and i look forward to more!

~hanyou-elf

Wow. I really like it so far...well, I don't like Naru-chan being raped *cried hysterically* but it made the first chapter a true attention grabber and shows that- yes- Naruto has a VERY big problem. Out of curiosity...are we going to know ahead of time what the pairings are or is that something we'll end up seeing for ourselves?

anyways...i can't wait for your next update. hope it's soon!

HAHA I like it! *that's from the movie with chevy chase(did i spell his name right)? Anyway, I love it so update soon!