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by DarkRainFiend

person nicole
schedule January 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am in love with this story, please, please release the next chapter. Shino x Naruto forever!

P.S.: fuck Sasuke and pink dumb slut :)

person yukina15
schedule July 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Beautifully done it showed passion and overwhelming love for each other. Please finish this!

person silverblaise
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
But why did you never write and post the third part?? WHY??!?!? I mean the second chapter can serve as an ending, it's pretty easy to guess that either Sakura's infertile or she's done something to herself to stop her conceiving as some kind of twisted ploy to keep Sasuke with her, but it still would have been nice to have the last part to wind everything up and see Sasuke get the comeuppance he so richly deserves. :-P
person Aots
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... you must finish this because I'm under the impression that I will be seeing a pregnant Naruto in the last(?) chapter!
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read the third chapter please continue !!!!!!
person Demoninmysoul
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UWAA! Again! I really want to see the end of this story!!! The way you picture the characters is waaay too realistic! It fits them perfectly! And to top it off the bedscene in the second chapter was incredible! Now I just want to see how things develope and settle...And preferably a huge slap in the face for the Uchiha-bastard!!!
If you don1t want to post, or just e-mailing is easier, I'd be more than glad to recieve it!
My adress is demoninmysoul@gmail.com
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ah~ So sweet! -kicks Sasuke- Can't say I've ever liked the teme. I'm so happy Shino was there for him. ^o^ The though of another part has me all excited; I do hope there will still be one. I've really enjoyed this story thus far.
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was incredible O.O

i wish you would write a multi-chapter story (more than 2 ch)

i feel like that one chapter could pass for at least 3 chs though lol.. i hope ch 2 is just as long or longer =P
person stephanie
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if i give the puppy dog eyes will u update soon please this is an amazing story an im jumping up an down awaiting eagarly your next chapter or better yet some more shino naruto fics yay
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ummm....Wow. Just wow. I am so emotionally and physically drained after reading this. With yet one more chapter to come! You are just SO amazing. Your lemon was fantastic. The story is riveting and I'm at a complete loss. Your awesome. End of story. Thank you so much