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for Overtaken

by TheSweetestHex

schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When are you updating?!!!!!
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you are writing this story I know it is going to be awesome!!! I am just so excited I hope the next chapter will come out soon!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder

Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.

Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.

Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!

Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
person pathenak
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!
i just read your story, it is really good written.why don't you continue??i admit, i like very much where it is going!'wink wink'
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story i hope you right the next chapter soon
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh please update soon. This story has such potential and it needs to be told!!! ^_^ im a sick sick girl at heart really lol
person roxnroll
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this way too much to be normal. Its really twisted. Can't wait to see where this goes
Rox
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The idea you're getting at is perfect.
The fact that noone else is writing it, true.
Perhaps because it's a pretty hard task to make
the chars not too OOC. It's a good story, but
I suggest you get someone to beta you... There
are a lot of mistakes. Both in spelling and
character discription.

Keep it up though.

~Rhianna
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the start can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. update soon
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
k I am like so hooked now. Please update soon!