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for First Time

by ShayBoo

person Anisa
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that last line is a hint of something to come because so far these two have been very hot together and I really hope to see more!
person Kyandoru
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I rarely find stories with Hayate in them. I am glad you wrote one!
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person ALD
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, so glad to see someone writing about these characters, they're some of my faves. The first two chapters were both HOT and sweet! Can't wait to see more.
person Onawa
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Fella - this is the first story I have read that included Hayate. I have only heard his name referenced by other characters. I am looking forward to where this story is going.
person Reily
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that the humour between these two was just adorable and Genma's caring and understanding towards Hayate was such a nice touch. Considering I don't seem to be able to find many stories between these two I'm really looking forward to reading more!