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Ah! I love IruKashi! I am looking forward to how this story turns out. Hopefully Iruka will get a break financially, and that Kakashi will realize what a treasure he is (instead of the only available lay). Sigh...

I'm not usually a fan of AU, but this is wonderful! I really love how emotionally-charged this story is. You've got me hooked! Little Naruto is so cute, and I love how Iruka works so hard from him to the point where he throws his own self-respect away in order to support him. I hope they find a much better life soon. Great writing!

This is a great fanfic! I really like the way you're presenting Kakashi and Iruka's characters. And your lemon scenes are hot!

Better. Much better. I didn't want to sound bossy, I just don't like to see stories unecessarily rushed when you can get so much out of little encounters between characters. A lot comes out of interaction, not just inner thoughts. Those are important, of course, but you really understand character through a combination of both. Keep going.

it's good !!!
kakashi is for hard work lol !
soon iruka would have him in his knees

I hope pick up for Iruka financially. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Great chapter. I'm glad this story is going to go on for awhile. There's a real shortage of good Iruka/Kakashi stories. Kakashi's characterization is good, but his attitude is pissing me off. Does he really like Iruka or is he just the only alternative. And Naruto is not my favorite character from the series, but you've written him in a way that's hard not to like him, he's just too cute. Update soon!

I like the pace of this story generally. It seems consistent with a story that starts with Kakashi and Iruka having sex (even if through prostitution). It seems to me that one of the possible difficulties of turning a one-night stand into a relationship is that the pace is always sporadic and unstable (please, don't ask me how I know...;-) And in the case of turning a trick into a relationship the problem of pacing must be even more problematic (now, this is only speculation :-).

In any event, I think this is a very good story. I love the premise. I love the misunderstandings and misgivings they both have about each other and their would-be, could-be relationship. I love the sporadic pace. Five steps forward and eight steps back seems very realistic for me ("yep," I think noding with a thoughtful expression, "very realistic"). I will definitely be reading your story until the end. I can't wait for your next update

Wow--it's been a long time since I read Chapter 1--yea--new chapters!!! Thanks for posting! So good!

I like how you set up the tone for the future of their relationship. Kakashi will have his work cut out for him if he hopes to win Iruka's heart, even if he doesn't realize he wants it at this point. This was a nice chapter.