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for Sharing Naruto

by Alexandrukas

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, u did get my hopes up...especially since you added that note over 5 months ago...
person Cyraxr
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story using an under used threesome. It is well written and don't worry about taking awhile to get the next chapter up it takes me quite awhile to write too so you are not alone when it comes to writing slowly. I know your summery didn't say anything about it but the seen with Ino screamed that she would get involved with them somehow. The fox teasing Naruto about his dreams with only using their unique features instead of their names sounds like something he would do if he was that aware of Naruto and what was going on around him. So update soon please. Signed a fan of Hinata, Sakura, and Ino.
person Josh
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how your making everything come together but how does Hinata become a part of the ordeal between Sakura and Naruto...
person Eight
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You need to update! So far really good! Keep doing what your doing, minus the slow updating LOL
person EroOjiSan
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, please :D
person Kami-sama
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this and will keep reading it if you continue it.
person wheathermangohanssj4
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a great start to a story. I think that this is the most logical setup for a 3-way. I mean it is clear from the manga that Sakura has some interest in Naruto so there relasonship is posible, even if I don't like. And obviasly Naruto has become more perverted over his time away and If he did not notice that Hinata is atractive he deserve to be castratid and or die a vergin. which makes a relasoinship of NaruHina, personal favorit but highly under writing couple.
person Quiet One
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Curious to see where you take this.
person Havenoname
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!

We need more! I can't wait for when the threesome actually comes (no pun intended).
person dest
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great start. please keep this story going. i can't wait to see how the threesome works out. If two of them are first and which two it will be. It would nice to put a naruto/ino bit in there but since it's not in the summary i am guessing it won't be here. To bad since that foursome would be great. you are clearly talented writer with backstory, can't wait to see how you do when the action heats up. keep up the good work.