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Reviewing my own stuff cause I'm too lazy/not mean enough just to update to put this in. To those of you who read the reviews and/or have reviewed, thanks, and I come bearing news. No, I will not be droppign this story. There are actually two chapters in the works at the moment, with some help/encouragement/lots of bribery in the form of Naru/Hina hentai from Kage Fuusha. No idea on the actual update date though, as I'm only about a quarter of the way through both and I refuse to post what I have and/or spoil it. The main thing keeping me from updating at the moment is work. I work six days a week, usually eight hour days so I have little time and most of what I have gets spent reading fic, looking for Naru/Hina smut worth reading (hey, isn't that why I wrote this in the first place...?), and playing video games (Okami and .hack//GU at the moment). So yeah, when I do eventually get off my ass and write, it'll be worth it. Ken/Kage Fuusha likes what he's seen so far, or so he's told me. So yeah, thanks for reading and reviewing, updates should be coming within the next...six months or so. Maybe more, maybe less.. enh.

You need to make a sequel. You cant just leave it at one chappie. Theres too many un answered questions

This has got to be one of the greatest written things on this entire website.
And the sex scene was awesome ;)

I really hope you continue to write it and want to thank you for actually writing this.

I've tried writing and it's harder than it seems.

Please tell me you're planning on continuing this! The second I started reading this story, I fell in love with it. This couple, I think, is one of the best, if not the best, fan couplings of Naruto and you've captured them so well. This story is written beautifully, and I hope to read more of it! Keep up with the outstanding work! ^^

Wow! That was a very well written story! I can not wait for the 2nd chapter. The sex scene was very nice and not rushed like most lemons I've read. Thank you for that. ^^ I love girl gossip lol And the part with people asking Naruto or Hinata if they did it was so funny XD "Did you use protection?" LOL! He'll gave to or else she might get pregnant ;) Update soon!!

LOVE IT!!! CAN'T GET ENOUGH NARUTO AND HINATA AND THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST!!! PLEASE (on hands and knees)MORE OF THEM!

A job well done comrade, very nice story. Continue the great work us Naru/Hina people are doing, there's none pairing so beautiful and heart warming as a Naru/Hina fiction, unless it's very poor in quality, anyways, continue our glorious march till the day when Naruto have a real Naru/Hina episode, move out comrade.

i love it, for once there is an actual belivable plot nit over the top like some people do. nice and slow build up, as it wasnt rushed. you are right about not enough sex in it but as you said there will be another chapter in it with more sex so it doesnt truly matter. i would liike to see a story with naruto/hinata/ino by you as i have a good feelin about you style of writing. thxs for the story and wish you good luck with any future writings

it is so unbearably refreshing to come across a real story on here again. i feel like a very disgruntled gold miner half the time, i spend weeks panning and only come up with a few nuggets and a whole lotta mud. there were a few moments when hinata came off a bit out of character, but it was still well enough within the margins that it could conceivably happen like that. i would very much be happy to have another installment of this story, it's length alone warrants attention. i can't stand those little fic-lets where you have three to thirteen so-so paragraphs then a big "to be continued!" well the only advice i could really offer for improvement would be to work on not moving too fast with hinata's development as a character, she tends to go fromextream to extream a little too fast at times. tone iot back and make it more gradual and i think you'll have her down. oh, i thoight you handled the pacing awesomely, by the way. it's one of the more subtle marks of a great story and you really nailed it. bravo for that. well i will cut this short, lest it turn into a love letter and not a remotly constructive review, but seriously. keep it up, you're restoring my faith in fanfiction authors. also, in closing, the ninjas vs pirates moment was a hoot

this stroy is great i hope you add more to it or make a sequel