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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great storie. Well written, great detail ,very funning and good size. I really like how you written it.
Can't wait for the next one but take your time and make a nother awesome storie.
Can't wait for the next one but take your time and make a nother awesome storie.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written, intelligent and with an actual plot. A rare thing to find. :-)
I really enjoyed it and would be glad to read another chapter or two.
I really enjoyed it and would be glad to read another chapter or two.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ninja Pirates! LOL
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! So much beautiful and well written crack, I laughed until I almost cried! I hope you come up with a second chapter, same size as the first chapter, soon!
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, i have to say it, absolutely awsome story. Really, it was very well done. you should be proud of yourself. on top of that here is a tidbit for fun. When i entered your story into microsoft works, you had A TOTAL OF 85 PAGES!!!!!! ON TOP OF THAT A WORD COUNT OF 32980.............
GREAT JOB. I really hope you continue on with this story.
GREAT JOB. I really hope you continue on with this story.
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MAN! this was a pretty hot fic and I'm not just saying that. I also love the fact that you had a good plot to go along with the sex scene. It made it more realsitc in terms of the Naruto charac ters and what not. GOOD JOB!!!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah, that was just... awesome!!
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing story, this is one of the best stories i have read on aff. i love your style of writeing, many of the other authors here spend alot less time on the story which makes it hard to read. i hope to see more stories and another chapter from you.
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its a very nice, well written, really funny story and i do hope the author continues and makes another chapter. What I'm really curious about though is how many people got the 'Tan Tan Tanuki' song. I fell over laughing after reading that. If you all want to know what it mean look up 'Tanuki' on Wiki. The song, and translation, is there for all those interested.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damm near perfect. It's so hard to find a good het story 'round these parts. If you could continue this it would be one of the all time greats on this site. It might even help stemm the tide of Yaoi crap.