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omfg....... well, first and foremost that was a heroic first chapter. This is now one of my all time favorite stories. You did a great job on this and you should be proud. In fact i only have one small issue with you........the summary. You have written a truly amazing piece of fanfic and yet the summary you gave is so lackluster I almost overlooked this story entirely. Shame on you for selling yourself so short. other then that great job and I will be looking forward to more chapters soon. If you need any help with beta reading I will be happy to assist. I can be reached at Nameramthgin@hotmail.com

1st I'd like to start off by saying that the ninja vs. pirates debate is one that myself and a few friends have been having for a few months now. ninja's all the way! this is a great story line, I love the fact that Hinata is so much more confidant. the fact that she takes charge is awesome, I love stories that do that. the "not-a-date" between Naruto and Sakura is great, I was laughing for most of that scene, the way that Anko jut kept popping up was hilarious. Having all of the girls actually reading Icha Icha was such a great twist to the story, it just shows that porn is not only for guys. lol. and the fact that Naruto actually wrote some of the volumes while still being a virgin was great. I love the way this story played out and I can see it going a lot of different ways. I hope you keep writing more of it, or at least do more fics. (you don't see as many good fics coming out anymore) and hey if you need a beta, just let me know I'd be glad to do it ^^ hope to see more of your work soon!!!

~Sora

this is a great story one of the best i've seen with this coupling (one of my favorites by the way)i hope you update soon there's so much you can put with this story, although the bushin clone orgy with all the girls sounds like a very good idea. whats going to happen with hinatas father. arrgh so many possiblites. please update

Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter (No matter how long it takes, I will still be waiting for it.)
If only there were more authors like you out there writing fanfiction. Oh well... we can dream, can't we?

Wow what a great read. I like how everything went with everyone but your right some of the characters were a lil Out of Character but other than that it was great. I read the first chapter and I got to say it was a great start to a great story. I hope you write more chapters to this story. I could be your beta if you want.... JTB8834@aol.com... E-mail me if you want

Alright sorry for the first post i was on my psp so it was short. First i always love the nar/hina fics and this was right for me. i love the humor u put in and the subtile jokes and inuendos ar the best. It was also one for the best fics i'vee ever read. that chp was so long and i like that because it was more fun to read not having to wait for a week. Best of all i love the whole "plan" sakura and hinata were making and it was so much better when she figured naruto like hinata anyhow keep it up. hope u get another one out soon.
~Dim Song

This was really wonderful, I especially liked Hinata and how she was willing to step up and go for what she wanted regardless of what anyone else thought. I also enjoyed the humour and found the story on the whole really enjoyable to read, although I have to admit that I'm kind of curious as to what Kakashi won in his bet with Anko, really good job!

Thank you; that was an amazing fic. It's good to see some people still writing NaruHina, and even better that you can write well (too many authors can't spell or use basic grammar). I look forward to possibly seeing more from you in the future. Ja ne!

Good god, that was excellent. i especially liked the pirate clones. please keep it up

OMG that was sooooo good, plz keep it up i loved it
~Dim Song