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Please update this soon. It's been too long, and I'd really like to read some more. This is going really good so far.

This is getting even better and better with each passing chapter. When are you going to update this? It would suck if this became one of those fics that never get finished...

LOVE!
i just read all 11 chapters so far and i really love it.
you have everyone init and then some its amzing and i can tell this is going to be an epic piece. i look forward to the next update.

you are a pretty good writer i will have you know, beside the small grammer glitches but no one really cares about those all we care about is you writing this story. if you dont you will make me very unhappy, love the story by the way

Great chapter. I am loving this story so far.

Wondering what the deal is with Dai, though. Please update really, really soon so I can find out. Thanks.

Please continue, Love the story!

I am gonna be honest with you, I think you put a song inbetween the paragraphs but you dodn't show the diffrence from the story so I got real confused and had truble fallowing. Once again, I realy like this story a lot. I think that you might be happer with it though if you took your time with it though. It feels a bit rushed and I know how easy it can be to rush the tiyping when the ideas are flowing.... That didn't malke sence! LOL!!!... I am trying to say that itfeels like your thoughts are faster than your hands so you tend to skinp on the discriptions or the fillers becous your head has already move on. I have to strugle with that to.

I know you didn't like this chapter, but I did. And I'd like to see where this story goes next very soon.

Please update soon, and more often. I really enjoy this fic.

I am still really loving this story.

Hope you update soon. :)

ooooooooOOOOOOOooooooooo Anthony's a trouble maker, he is! mwhahahhahahhaa.