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I really want to see where you're going with this, it could be really good. Keep it up.

No no nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! how could you just stop. I can't what to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

No no it wasn't a crappy face to leave off... although I wish you hadn't left off at all but hey - can't have everything can we? Anyway, it's getting even more interesting and I liked that Naruto ran into the door hehe - it seemed like a Naruto thing to do, ne?

Update when you can ^_6

Hina xXxx

Lots of angst! Really interesting background story for Naruto and Sasuke. :)

i LOVE it ^_^

ooo, that was quite nice. some of the characterization was a bit cliched, but theres something at the core of every cliche that made it good in the first place, so it has great potential, and from here you could take it somewhere completly different if you wanted. anyways, i will wait patiently hoping you'll update *fic love*

It's really good. It's very descriptive and really gives you a feel for Sasuke's character. I also like the inclusion of the song it makes the entire experience sort of surreal which is very apt when you think of moving around with headphones on. I also like the story line, it's seems like one of those "don't give up on the world, as soon as you stop looking things start to happen" kind of stories and that's so how life is. I hope you continue, you write well and I'd like to read more of it.

Well, you're off to a great start. :) Keep going!