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by DreamsOfShadow

schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. You have to keep going that was way beyond hot the great Sasuke lost and then .Wonders off in a daze.
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o

Finish...dude! What a place to leave a fic! Evil! Completely, totally, purely Evil!
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was evil but good! I was looking forward to the lemon but then Ka-boom! The descend of ultimate evil cliffy... Anyway, if it'll get you to finish it... so far it was good! But I think you could have made Sasuke more suggestive and the conversation more kinky. Looking forward for more, bye!
person mydarkerside
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I feel about pulling triggers. Maybe I give you cookies instead?