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person Silver
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I almost cried. That may have been very Haku based, but it was extreemly well written. You got all of the right emotions involved.
person chichi
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TT_TT
You made me cry!!!
person Kaishiou
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was beautifully written. the ending was heartbreaking.
person Moon-Lily
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW i thought it was pretty good. Ive been looking for a story like this one. I only wished it wasn't a one shot, but it was one of few that were really good. I liked the concept of the character similarity, that you made with Naruto/Haku. All in all i enjoyed it.


Ja matta ^_^
keep writing.
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* my god. that was beautiful. thank you so much for sharing this with us. that had to be the best naru-tool story i've had the pleasure of reading. thank you again.