schedule
February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... You need to work on spelling and gramar. The lack of those two made my head hurt and made this fic hard to read. Good concept though. However, right now it's like a train wreak. terrible, aweful, but you cant stop reading it.
schedule
February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH that fic was awesome it kicked my ass so bad, i can't wait for more (sorry for incoherence and lack of anything useful to say, still much love)
schedule
February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting plot. Definately want to read more.