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Xcellent.arigato.

Beyond Xcellent.arigato

i don t usually review,but i felt like I had to, for 2 reason.
1-I read your fic yesterday night and got too tired bucause i read it in one shot. I found your story amazing!!
I m looking right now on google if I could find more fic that you wrote. cause honestly, you re now my favorite author.
2-i ve checked through ff.net for more of your fic. do you have any more hidden? could you write more please? I loved your view of the character and loved moiya.so if you have more fic, please, PLEASE!! send them to me or tell me where to find more!!

i think i ll go to bed very late again tonight because of you..:)

and if you ever release a novel, tell me, i ll go buy it right away. loved your work

Okay, I'm at a loss for words.........That was so sad!!!!*tears falling* Sweetie, you've got some talent there. The way you wrote that last chapter left me, and I'm sure, everyone else who's read it, wondering if Kakashi knew that mission would be his last. Revealing to Sakura and Naruto the fact that he had once been married, and widowed, and finally pulling down his mask, showing his face to them, and the message he left for Naruto. The timeskip was genuis! The entire story was great, showing the emotions, the sadness, the happiness..The best story I've ever read.

Well, thanks for the link!! It was awesome!! I started reading and just couldn't stop! I like the Moiya character, it sucks you killed her off. lol! I know that was more to go with Kakashi's character though. I would have loved for it to have been longer. Maybe more about them getting married or even her having a kid. That would have been cool. And the sex was fucking hot! That's always a plus! As you say us AFF people can't get enough sex! Anyway, keep it up! Great stuff!

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NarutoJunkie

That was really good. Very sad though. I loved this fic. I think it could have gone on longer, but you are the writer. I enjoyed the Moiya character, even if some people don't like the OC's. I think it brings depth to the story. So they got married-and she died? I think a sequel could come from this and mayber detail on the marriage and her death. Just a thought. Keep up the good writing. I'll keep reading.
Rox

i read this all in 1 shot. You are a very good story teller. I am very into this story. I would like to see a little more dialog between them though. Keep up the good work.

Rox

Excellent, simply excellent. You have brough to life the Kakashi we have all wanted and hoped to see. You are an excellent writer, getting into the heads of your characters and bring out the deep feelings. You have shown Kakashi's difficult live, his difficult choices and his redeeming choice in staying with his friend.

Keep writing, you have talent.

Taishorin

I love this story! I started reading it a couple of hours ago and I couldn't stop! I can't wait for your next update!!

Sorry, but OC's are lame IMO. Especially for Naruto fanfics. It's not like there is a lack of characters to chose from. It's a shame. The story is actually well written. It would just be so much better if you used one of the many females that already exist.