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for Natural-Born Predator

by SenyaLing

schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm....
Dark and twisted, and the title certainly makes me think....
This is a very good start. I look forward to reading more.
Also: I hope that either Minato saves Kakashi or Kakashi escapes, though I wouldn't object to Kakashi gaining a more...feral...outlook.
You're doing well with this so far. :)
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So promissing and unfinished. I don't know if it's only my bad luck but all stories with the most interesting pairings seem to be left without an end...
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't know when this story was put out but it was very intriging. I hope that it get's finished as I would like to read more.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't know when this story was put out but it was very intriging. I hope that it get's finished as I would like to read more.
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D Unfortunatly Kabby would still be unborn/infant around the time of Kakashi's teens. Unless Kakashi is almost fifteen and then he'd be around six. Other than that, it's pretty good.
person Sevius
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's pure awesome-ness! MOAR! i loved it : D
person Horong
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, super! I am dumbfounded and happy by this fic! When ARE you going to continue? Check out mine at FFnet under the same name, but it doesn't go sex so fast like this one! Please by all means Don't Drop This, and Don't Leave Us! OroKaka is a nice, dark pairing!
person Ellel2000
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oi Oi! I really like this!! you should continue it. Please?
person Aufie
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good work, and I very much like your writing style (even if I am disturbed at finding the plot fascinating!). Is there going to be any further chapters?
person chibicherryblossum
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far...weird pairing but its still good ^^