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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ookay. First chapter was pretty good, with the exception that Naruto's eyes are blue, not green, aka. sapphire not emerald. After that tho, whoever continued the story has appaling grammar and spelling skills. They skipped parts, miswrote parts, and overall did a poor job of writting. I even got lost reading it. I know this is pretty much just a porn site, but come on. That was just sad.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is awesome
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I have to really ask for is put a bit of a story behind how Naruto got each girl and do some checking on the spelling and I am happy
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the review of my storie and you not bad your self keep up the good work and i really do like it.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're forgetting about Ayame.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really dont understand your story. its good porn but the story just jumps from one point to another with nothing tieing the chapters together. i guess its pwp with an attempt at a story.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cool naru/anko action. I wonder what the babies would look like. Continue
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(I hope you make this into a Harem fanfic with Tayuya, Tenten, Temari, Hinata, Sakura, Ino and Anko in Naruto's Harem)
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(I hope you make this into a Harem fanfic with Tayuya, Tenten, Temari, Hinata, Sakura, Ino and Anko in Naruto's Harem)
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Naruto/Ayame lemons. They're so rare. Keep up the good work and update soon!