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for Mating of the Fox

by bloodrain01

person Jin
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is strange. The writing and detail is good, but the two people in this fic don't match anyone I know in the Naruto series, much less Naruto and Hinata. Emerald and gray eyes...I don't know who that could be.
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
People are picky. Pay no attention to that other review. Some details were off, but you rock. You are the first one to write my story, and I love you. I am, as we speak, doing a happy dance.


And as a side note to the first reviewer;

I posted that challenge this afternoon. So this was, quite literally, a couple hours work. So unless you think you can do better, be nice. And if you can do better, be nice anyway!

I have spoken.