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by Mikeal

person Eternel
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is kind of a good reason, considering it had to end sometime, and if you were getting bored with it, and saw it going no further then it's a good way to have ended it, at least you didn't abandon your story like some writers do. It is better to have a story with an unsatisfying/shitty ending (not saying that it was that bad) than to abandon the story completely and leave your readers angry and wondering what could have been.
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So it's out heh Neji and Shikamaru(hotness in spades), and Sasuke' being a prude? O_O Poor Naruto has to resort to peeking hehe (heh I'd peek either way). Nice chps. ^_^ chps., I'll be on the look out for the next update ^_6

Hina xXxx
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off. PLEASE NO MALE PREGNANCY! It would totally ruin an otherwise well off story. Also, thank you for updating so often. Cookies for you. :)
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add that I would also like to see a Neji/Shika/Neji pairing if possible. Love all around. :)
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was mean what Tsunade did, but at least Sasuke will tell Naruto how he feels. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg-this is so cute and funny! I love it! PLZ write more! I wanna see some lemon w/ Sasu/Naru!!! ALso-I hope poor Shikimaru finds someone---what about Neji? ^_^
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I also wanted to add that yes-if u hvae Sasuke have any kids-mahe it a mpreg---He will be so funny pregnant! Lol! And Naruto trying to help him-----LOL!!!!! No artifical insemination w/ a woman-plz!!! ^_^
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol Chapter 16 is so funny. Great job.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm let's see how Naruto takes the newsne? hehehe, that will certainly be interesting, very nteresting.
Nice ^_^

Hina xXxx
person Zigana
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I haven't laughed so hard at such antics in a long time. I love it. Keep going. I just got to remember to keep a mouth gag handy so I don't wake the rest of the house.