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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evil evil person! What a way to end he chapter!I really like how the smut and the plot of this story intertwine and go hand in hand. However, it may have been me reading too fast but it seemed like there were some parts in the story that were a little chopp or disorienting and I had to go back and reread sentences. The sexual tension between Sakura and her team mates is almost tangible. I love it! But I have a question. Did Sakura seriously run all the way from the training grounds to her apartment and through the streets of Konoha without a top?
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazinggggg! i love this first chappy! Im dying to see whats gonna happen next! please update soon! thanks a bunch