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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
update
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
interesting
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are going to fast. Give yourself and the characters time to adapt to new situations. For example most would be pissed or shocked when they found an uncle when someone were an orphan an beaten up for 15 years. Same with Kyuubi, let Ino and Shika be shocked at first so they can think about it.
I am sorry if this review sounds like a flame that wasn't my intention if it does
I am sorry if this review sounds like a flame that wasn't my intention if it does
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story. I hope that you finish it. There are to many good fanfics that are forgoten. I hope this one doesn't join them among the darkness of forgoten fanfics. Please! post another chapter.
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
With much respect,
The Prince of Madness
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! AND HOTTT!!!!!!!! I REALLY would like to read more of it!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice too bad u put hinata with gaara though i just cant see her with anyone but naruto
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love the whole factor of storytelling so far, structured pretty well. Love to see who else Naruto's going to have in his Harem. Update soon!
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhh. I like it! Keep up the good work!
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon