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by FlameTwirler

person poornmiserable
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well it makes sense to have them realize what they feel for each other in 9 chaps otherwise it would have come out rushed an just very wrong.....well i commend you on a job well done hope to read more of your fics
person ninjakitty
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well written
person nasis
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it, and thought that the ending was good.
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i have been readint his since the beginning....sorry im a lurker i know it


But i had to review because i love your little story


i can just imagine what you could do if you decided to write a full on story....with a lemon!
It wasnt to cheesy...plus cheese is good for you

thank you again
happy writing
krickitat
person poornmiserable
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY THAT WAS CUTE i really like these drabbles i cant wait for the last ones