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by Trollmia

schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yes! I loved Hisashi's punishment! It was perfect. Poor Hinata-chan...that was so evil of him to do to her.

I think my favorite parts of this story were Orochimaru's pervy-ness towards half nakie Sasuke and Sasuke going to take a flying leap out of the window only to have Jiraiya stop him.

I can't wait to see Tenten's reaction to Hina-chan's incubus :-D

Great job and I'm so glad you're back to writing! Keep going!!
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not bad a pair you dont normal see together i kinda liked it
person yourdearestwish
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like hina/sasu as a pair and him as a sexy demon is too good. Kudos, Dearest
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I couldn't believe when I saw that you had updated! Its been so long its just good to see you writing again.

I enjoyed the new chapters immensely! I decided to read the entire story over again and I just love it! I love how Sasuke took care of his sick Hinata. It was just so sweet and I loved Gaara's reaction the the 'self writing-pencil.'

Also, yours is the only story where I've seen Gaara and Tenten together and you've made them very cute together! Great job on that.

This story is just wonderful and I can't wait for more! Update when you can and of course, my high praise of this piece of SasuHina goodness will follow shortly!

Ezzie

*Off to read the other updated story*
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm So In Love With This Story.Tantalizing.And Well-Written,As Well. =)
person dragonslayer
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story is still great I wish it would be updated soon!
person rylolynn
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just like I said before, love it! That was a great use of Sai.

So who was right? Sasuke or Hinata? Was Sasuke over reacting or Hinata too Naïve?
Can't wait to read more. *stares at computer waiting for another update*
person Chrono22
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 11 and I plan on reading more as soon as I get a chance.

Tainted InuShemeeko
person Chrono22
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I think I said before, I have never gave the Sasuke/Hinata pairing a thought but wow. I hope there will be more chapters to this yummy story in the future.

Tainted InuShemeeko
person Chrono22
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have read the first four chapters of this story and I find them very interesting. I am looking forward to getting chance to read more. A Sasuke/ Hinata pairing I never thought of that before.

Tainted InuShemeeko