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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and can't wait for more. I was great. I love the change in Saskae. It flows so well. Please MORE!!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh... so beautiful. I really liked this story it is very interesting and can't wait to read more. *stares at computer waiting for an update* (Then sneeks off to Hinata's room to steal her painting of smexy incubus Sasuke.)
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more and more every time I read another chapter. Good work, I can't wait to see where you go with it.
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just started to like this pairing, so this story is a nice find. So...please hurry with the sex!! Lol.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, its been a while since I've had a chance to review, but gods above, this chapter and the last were just wonderful! I never really had a connection to Tenten, but this is making me love her. Such wonderful writing and amazing ideas..you always keep my attention with your fics. I so cant wait to see how their relationship progresses. Amazing job!!!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeee I love this story!!!!!! It's Me Rainshi from Y!Gallery!!! I love this story just as much as I love your Yaoi story you're just great all around I hope you contiune all of your stories soon!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!! Finally got some action going on right toward the end there!!! And it was set up so nicely too. Anyway, I like the name you gave the chapter, "Yeah, he can play fetch too." That just gave me the chuckles. Thanks for this and I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...what a close call, I totally freaked out over a possible terminal illness that she may have had over nothing. That's what I get for forgetting that she faints a lot--it just goes to show that there's so many directions this fic could be taken in. By the way, how did Sasuke "sense" there was something wrong with Hinata? Did they somehow form a link of some sort? I also can't wait to find out what happens next. thanks for the update.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this chapter came quick. Cool, now I know how Gaara plays into this. I think it's so cute that Sasuke is so worried about Hinata. Was her fainting spell what made him panicked? Or, is he just a worrywart? I wonder how Hinata's going to explain Akamaru's sudden appearance. And what a cliffhanger! I hope she is alright, and that her fainting spell is just due to her being her normal self. Hehe, thanks for this and I look forward to the next update!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wow. You really are a great writer of sensual prose. I reallyl ike this story, and I'm so happy you updated. I look forward to all the tasty bits coming up!