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YES!! The long awaited chapter is out! Yea! Anyway, now that I've calmed down you'd probably want my thoughts? I'm wondering how Hinata is going to bring up the topic of arousal to Tenten w/o also telling her who is causing her arousal. It's probably going to be very awkward. I'm also wondering if Gaara and Naruto are going to play a bigger part to this story. I also just realized that because Sasuke can touch others even if they can't sense him, therefore, if anyone does accuse Hinata of being crazy, he can just touch them! But in getting Hinata out of the psyche ward, he'll probably have to fend off demon slayers, exorcists, scientists or what not instead. Anyway, enough of my random thoughts--I like how Sasuke is now devoting himself to Hinata, even at the expense of hunger. Hopefully, he can hang in there. I thought the ending to chapter 8 was so cute! Can't wait to see what happens next! I look forward to your next update.

Graet story!
Please continue!

LOVE IT! Not sure when the last time you updated was, but please continue this! It's not often I find such a good read. Keep it up!

Hehe...this is getting too funny. If I were in Hinata's shoes, I would kill Sasuke for that. Or, maybe lock him up or tie him down next time someone visits. I definitely wouldn't be happy if my freedom was on the line for all those stunts he pulls. Then again, he can't be blamed for all of it; no one likes to be ignored. Anyway, thanks for explaining how he can manipulate objects w/o anyone noticing. It seems if he wanted to, with Hinata's help, he is able to prove his existence. I wonder if Hinata actually knows he's an incubus (I mean she knows he's a demon but not what kind, right?) Hmm...well, thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to the next update. (btw, can't thank you enough for keeping the updates frequent...it's nice to get a little cuteness from this couple)

you are evil to leave it there! But I love the update! Good job as always!

Those wings, soo sexy, this is well done and so unusual, I love it.

awww...this is SO CUTE!!! They're bonding. And Hinata's got the sixth sense. That's terrific. I'm so excited to see what direction you're going to take this. I cannot wait for the next update. Is she really going to be able to try flying? And how are they going to deal with public situations? Can Sasuke prove his presence to others if he really wants to? Like for example, could he lift some object up and everyone who is not Hinata would only be able to see a floating object? Can people see the sheet he's wearing? Or do things just look like they disappear when he touches them? You don't really have to answer questions--I think I just got a little overexcited. Anyway, keep it up and please update soon!

What an unusual idea.I can't wait untillshe believes him

Awesome story! Very unique!

Hmmm...I have to admit I was surprised she was willing to give consent to this kind of arrangement so quickly. I mean, it was just a moment ago when she felt like she had lost it. I was totally expecting Sasuke to go through a bunch of trials just to convince her that he is not a figment of her imagination. Now, they actually seem to be on friendly terms, so this fic is moving a lot faster than I expected. Then again, maybe she's not completely convinced and just thought it didn't matter whether or not he was a figment of her imagination--he seems to be harmless, therefore, it was probably easier to just comply. Oh well, whatever the case, I guess I'll find out soon. I can't wait to see where you're going to go with this. Keep up the good work and update soon.