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I LOVE YOU!!!! This is so awesome!

I love the story plz continue....

wow I can see a long hard wait for our poor sasuke! ^_^
Great story, you must go on, it's fun, and new.

OMG! I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE 4 THE LOVE OF GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

stupid moment of downtime, just when I was about to click "review" that stupid webpage shows up. Anyway, so HAPPY you updated! Poor Hinata is distressed! I appreciate you adding in more detail to describe Sasuke as an incubus. When you mentioned large wings earlier, I was imagining the form Sasuke transformed into in his battle against Naruto at the Valley of the End (yeah--that's not a very attractive image). Anyway, your version suits this story much better so I'm very happy about that. Also happy to see that Naruto and Gaara have made an appearance. Are they still demon vessels in this fic or are they just normal cops? I guess I'll find out as the story progresses. Looking forward to your next update and keep the work.

I still love it!!!! I would shower you with gifts of Pocky I love it so much!

Oohh...naru and Gaara as firefighters...thats just a beautiful image! You did a great job on this...i kinda feel bad for both Hina-chan and Sasuke kun. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Ezri

Hehe, Hinata is also funny in this fic: "'Is it ok if I faint?' she whispered hoarsely.'Faint?' But he didn’t get any answer from the pale eyed woman because her eyes rolled back and she went limp underneath him.
She had fainted." This story is so original and I love how you can put a little humor in such an awkward first meeting! Please update soon!

I like this alot!Please continue.

Wow, talk about an original idea, I think its great. Keep up the good work!

Legilmyth