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for Caught in the Act

by SoulOrchard

person blueh
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You have great ideas. Love the plot. Very cute and cheeky too. A couple of mistakes but not very important. Keep writing.

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schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto got molested by Sai!! So Kiba has a crush on Naruto too? I love how Sasuke is so possessive and so perverted! :)
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's so cute! i hope there's another soon!
person Vague
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG what the heck are you waiting for! get to writing. I see so much potential I cant even tell you how excited I am for this story. HUrry pretty please?
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its really good i know im gonna like this one its sounds like its going to be a very interseting one to read
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ineresting and Funny so far I'll keep an eye on it and see were it goes, because it seems to be going good places.
person animehead
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Ah yes! You must keep going. It's funny. Naruto is such a loveable idiot. haha I can't wait to see what trouble Sasuke gets him in to!