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for Overtime

by BishounenKrazed

person Raven White
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for once in my life, I'm seriously contimplating taking up football
person Yuri-san
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A football game in Konoha! Awsome. That alone had me grinning from the start
...And then...
There was smut.
OMG The smut!! I need a spatula, because some time during the smut, my eyeballs seem to have flown out of their respective sockets and stuck to the monitor.
That sex talk was so f-ing hot. O_O And that was some of the best, slightly kinky, animalistic, SasUKE, sex I've ever read. EVER.
Whoo! People need to make thank-you one shots more often. ;D

P.S. Neji is a voyeur. XD;;;
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What fun! And so sexy, too!

I smiled all the way through. You've got a really good sense of humor, and it translates well into your writing.

Hooray for Overtime!
person pantherrose
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now that was really, really hawt. Wonderful job, and Happy Late Valentine's Day!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah! That was hot. I liked it alot. And Naruto as the aggressor--a very welcomed turnabout here. Good job.
person narufan
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so good. it had me drooling. i love u!! u have a really good writing style. and not just the smut. good luck. happy late valentin's day.
person VRon8899
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HaHa! Cute and HOTT!! Nicely done!!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yes! This was the best Valentine's Day present ever! NaruSasu smut always makes me happy, especially since people always seem to see fit in making Naruto uke. He has a demon inside him dammit! Let the boy top once in awhile! Woot! Excellently written me dear. Makes me want to write some decent smut too.
person Fantastical Me
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee. Very cute. I love seme Naruto. Thanks for the Valentine's Day treat!
person Adi
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O

*drool*

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