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by BishounenKrazed

person Allys
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, *Smirk* Very VERY Nice. Happy Valentines Day, That was an awesome way to kick off the day.
person Hello
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, ha. I like this, especially the end. :p
person hanyou-elf
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaa! oh my gods! i love you so much! thank you so, so, so, so much! you did a wonderful job with this story and i love it so, so much.

*fans self* wow. if football was played like this more often... i would love it even more. but as it stands, one beautiful piece of work. and naruto fucking sasuke into the ground... *drools* this was hot and fantastic and wonderfully done. (what else to expect from you, ne?) i loved the game, the characters were in character, and the smut... *drooling*

i love you! *plots kidnapping*

thank you!
~hanyou-elf
(if you want me to write you anything at all, just let me know... i'll do my best!)
person lo
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome. The football game and the sex scene were just awsome. This was just a fun piece of fiction. Great job!!
person Zrina
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was allllll kinds of hotttt!!!!!!! Awesome smex!