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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting. I hope you update soon. Will he get with Sasuke or Gaara...Well Please update soon!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE JOB!! *good guy pose*
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good and sad. but it seems unfinished
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Urm... Was that the end? Hmm... Anyway, this is in fact a good plot. I'd hope you'll expand it further. And... somewhere along the line, I got confused by the PoV. Had to re-read it to understand.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know how you felt when I read this. It made me feel better. I loved it. I kinda hope there's more but if not then o well, really good job.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i feel it went too fast, there wasnt any buildup, or much description, it felt more like a summary of the story. you kept switching between first person POV and third person, sometimes mid sentence.
i really like the story line itself, its very intriguing, and has the potential to go on for many more chapters, but it needs more detail.
i really like the story line itself, its very intriguing, and has the potential to go on for many more chapters, but it needs more detail.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, though I did feel a little sorry for them, especially Sasuke. I'm hoping for more.