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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story , you stretched it out to 51 chapters without making it long winded. Great work. let me know when you are updating.
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ive been trying not to post coz ive been drinking but i couldn’t hold it back after this, to be fair i have ignored this fic for well... ages now ive been reading it i regret it, you are a very skilled writer, you story line is powerful and intense ive never read a fic where they try to change the villages before, im really touched and am really in love with your fic sorry i haven't read it before and in any hope that my lame assed drunken comment came in any way keep you writing i would be overjoyed thank you so much for the privilege XD
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 50: Implication? I thought I noticed something was going on, but I wasn’t sure what. . . . (*snort*) Once again, I love Itachi’s concern. X3
Wuh-oh. If those stay, Arashi’s going to have it rough in life. Kyuubi, did you know about this? . . . . “Oops?” ljsikogf;jdkil XDDDD . . . . Nice about the “antagonizing a vixen defending kits.” ^_^ . . . . Yikes, those are going to be tough kiddies! (It’d be interesting if one of them were to take a bad path later in life.) . . . . This is pretty cool, these abilities. Normally I’d think they’re over-the-top, and they are kind of extreme, but I like them and they make sense. I like how you described them. . . . Does the definition of “pack members” extend to Sasuke as well? Cuz that’d be cool. . . . (*snort*) Love how Naruto cooled down and then blew up again. XD . . . . LOL, Iruka’s line! “Well, I have to admit he’s cute like this.” XDD . . . . I can totally hear Tsunade yelling that. XD This is great. =) . . . . (*chokes on laughter*) Th-th-the s-s-s-sn-sn-snake. . . ! XD His attitude! (*falls over laughing*) Ho man, that’s crazy. ^_^ . . . . Err, whoops. “You and I both know damn well that was there before now so how and why is it there now?” Might want to change the first “was” to “wasn’t”. I was a little confused reading the sentence. ^_^;
(*snicker*) “And Sasuke was trying to calm Kaji down and considering stealing some of Tsunade’s sake.” He’s probably getting a headache from all this excitement and jumping from one thing to another, but Sasuke, sake isn’t going to help your head, dear. ^_^ . . . . Lol, Naruto’s reaction of “What next?” That whole sentence was great. ^_^ Actually, that entire tiny paragraph was probably one of my favorites, because I can visualize it and hear it to total perfection. ^_^ . . . . Love exactly how they “hammered it out.” ^_~
I get the feeling Sasuke’s going to try to make some amends. . . . Õ.Õ For God’s sake, don’t the ninja have any control at all?! If it’s good enough for the Hokage, it should be good enough for you not to attack a person in their sleep, damn you bastards! Sasuke, give the guy hell for me, will ya? Thanks! õ_õ (*huffs*) . . . . Thanks, Sasuke. Dude, you better listen to him, you know what he’s like when his family’s threatened. . . . (*impressed*) Nicely stated, Sasuke. Can I take lessons? . . . . Heheheh, love how Sasuke knows just how to describe himself. ^^ :heart: . . . . “May take them centuries for them to make a decision?” Isn’t that dangerous? I mean, are the snakes going to run wild or what? õ_ô
I like how you described the exhaustion catching up with them. . . . Love their little exhausted conversation. =)
Whaaat? Don’t rewrite it, it’s fine.
Okay, I've reviewed every chapter! Pleeeaaase update soon! ^_^
Wuh-oh. If those stay, Arashi’s going to have it rough in life. Kyuubi, did you know about this? . . . . “Oops?” ljsikogf;jdkil XDDDD . . . . Nice about the “antagonizing a vixen defending kits.” ^_^ . . . . Yikes, those are going to be tough kiddies! (It’d be interesting if one of them were to take a bad path later in life.) . . . . This is pretty cool, these abilities. Normally I’d think they’re over-the-top, and they are kind of extreme, but I like them and they make sense. I like how you described them. . . . Does the definition of “pack members” extend to Sasuke as well? Cuz that’d be cool. . . . (*snort*) Love how Naruto cooled down and then blew up again. XD . . . . LOL, Iruka’s line! “Well, I have to admit he’s cute like this.” XDD . . . . I can totally hear Tsunade yelling that. XD This is great. =) . . . . (*chokes on laughter*) Th-th-the s-s-s-sn-sn-snake. . . ! XD His attitude! (*falls over laughing*) Ho man, that’s crazy. ^_^ . . . . Err, whoops. “You and I both know damn well that was there before now so how and why is it there now?” Might want to change the first “was” to “wasn’t”. I was a little confused reading the sentence. ^_^;
(*snicker*) “And Sasuke was trying to calm Kaji down and considering stealing some of Tsunade’s sake.” He’s probably getting a headache from all this excitement and jumping from one thing to another, but Sasuke, sake isn’t going to help your head, dear. ^_^ . . . . Lol, Naruto’s reaction of “What next?” That whole sentence was great. ^_^ Actually, that entire tiny paragraph was probably one of my favorites, because I can visualize it and hear it to total perfection. ^_^ . . . . Love exactly how they “hammered it out.” ^_~
I get the feeling Sasuke’s going to try to make some amends. . . . Õ.Õ For God’s sake, don’t the ninja have any control at all?! If it’s good enough for the Hokage, it should be good enough for you not to attack a person in their sleep, damn you bastards! Sasuke, give the guy hell for me, will ya? Thanks! õ_õ (*huffs*) . . . . Thanks, Sasuke. Dude, you better listen to him, you know what he’s like when his family’s threatened. . . . (*impressed*) Nicely stated, Sasuke. Can I take lessons? . . . . Heheheh, love how Sasuke knows just how to describe himself. ^^ :heart: . . . . “May take them centuries for them to make a decision?” Isn’t that dangerous? I mean, are the snakes going to run wild or what? õ_ô
I like how you described the exhaustion catching up with them. . . . Love their little exhausted conversation. =)
Whaaat? Don’t rewrite it, it’s fine.
Okay, I've reviewed every chapter! Pleeeaaase update soon! ^_^
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::whoops:: A great update. And Naruto passed out! Man, that cracked me up! So, we're gonna be seeing more of the living members of the Uzumaki clan?
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Love the story!¢¾ It's so GOOD! ^^ and I absolutely LOVE your author notes their hilarius. ^^ You seem to have SOOOO much fun. Please don't stop writing *puppy eyes* I love the way you write I wish I could write fanfics but all I seem able to do are original stories and I'm too scared of posting those because of plagerism :( Oh well that's it...I think... ^_^'
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45: Call me a stiff, but no chapter for a week isn’t anything to die about. Now, if it had been the case of the author dying . . . that’s what I call a good reason to die. (*nods with conviction*)
Ooh, Orochimaru had a kid! =0 . . . . “Corpse-pale,” nice description. =D . . . . Interesting story. . . . Heh. Love this part: “Naruto, forgive me, but I’m about to complicate your life.” ^^ . . . . Ooh, interesting about Naruto possibly being cool while Sasuke’s being untrusting.
Right off the bat, Sasuke’s on guard. . . . . Hmm, did Kakashi have a thing with Obito in the past? Or does Iruka just think so? . . . . (*snort*) I’ve love to see Tsunade bitch-slap Sasuke. XD . . . . Ooh, nice one, Naruto. =) . . . . I like Tsunade’s last line of the scene.
Ooh, nice room! Where did that come from?
That was a cute chapter! I liked it! :heart: . . . . How come they’re pissed because of those pictures? They know you have pictures of them and it’s never bothered them before. õ_ô
Ooh, Orochimaru had a kid! =0 . . . . “Corpse-pale,” nice description. =D . . . . Interesting story. . . . Heh. Love this part: “Naruto, forgive me, but I’m about to complicate your life.” ^^ . . . . Ooh, interesting about Naruto possibly being cool while Sasuke’s being untrusting.
Right off the bat, Sasuke’s on guard. . . . . Hmm, did Kakashi have a thing with Obito in the past? Or does Iruka just think so? . . . . (*snort*) I’ve love to see Tsunade bitch-slap Sasuke. XD . . . . Ooh, nice one, Naruto. =) . . . . I like Tsunade’s last line of the scene.
Ooh, nice room! Where did that come from?
That was a cute chapter! I liked it! :heart: . . . . How come they’re pissed because of those pictures? They know you have pictures of them and it’s never bothered them before. õ_ô
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 46 45: Oh hey, Jiraiya. . . . (*snort*) Love this part: “Sai: I think I’m going to give up on trying to maim TW. She always finds a way to slither out of trouble. Itachi: Much like Orochimaru.” XDD (Sorry, TW, I’m a connection whore. I love it when people make connections between things. *sweat*) . . . . “[. . .] but his ass is still untouched.” And then we met Madara, and that apparently changed. (Not by me, it’s just majority. ^^;) . . . . You and your darn spoilers, TW! Why’d you have to tell me what’s going to happen with Kakashi & Iruka? õ_õ
Chapter 45 again. 9_9
Love that whole first paragraph. ^^ . . . . I don’t blame you for being worried, Iruka, but don’t count the chickens just yet. . . . Is Kakashi really oblivious to the cause of Iruka’s anxiety? . . . . Must’ve been a lot of work to heal Obito. He was buried in a freakin’ rockslide, for crying out loud. . . . I like the details to Obito’s treatment.
I like this discussion and the reason for Obito’s irritation. . . . Very well-done argument. . . . Wait a minute, Obito’s abused? Dang. o_o . . . . Hey, do I see an echo of the argument that Sasuke and Naruto had at the Valley? . . . . This is an awesome scene! =D . . . . Awww, so sweet. :heart: . . . . You know, this might be the first Kakashi scene that I’ve liked (when it comes to adult stuff, you know). . . . (*snort*) “. . . I can’t believe you just said that.” XDD . . . . Wow, GREAT scene! I like how it ended! And I probably would’ve still liked it if they had gone all the way! Good job! =DDD And I also like how they subtly planned stuff for the next night and it wasn’t too blatantly obvious. I had to remember that the next night never happened. Really well-done. ^_^
Good first line, Obito. . . . “Kakashi laughed, ‘I’ll bet that was fun.’” XDD . . . . “Long past midnight,” wow. Understandable too. Iruka’s not going to be too happy, though. . . . Aww, poor Iruka. This also had a very nice description, this scene.
I wonder why they’re all looking cowed; is Iruka being scary? . . . . Well, that answers that. Nice one, Iruka, growling at Sasuke like that. ^_^ And Sasuke, you need to lighten up and give her a chance. . . . Cute, Kana offering to help and Iruka gently saying “No thanks.” I like Iruka’s line, I can hear him saying it. ^_^ . . . . So Iruka gets feisty when he’s jealous, eh? Heheh. . . . XD “Give Gaara a run for his money,” yikes. XD . . . . Sasuke, can you possibly be any more subtle? (*sarcasm*) . . . . I do like his line: “I think that your empathy [. . .] danger she could be.” I like the reasoning, and not just jumping right to it. . . . Naruto has a good counter-reason as well. . . . Say, when did Naruto hear about Obito’s story? . . . . “I have a mission to get to.” I wonder if that’s Sasuke’s way of giving in, or if he’s just being a stubborn ass. Hard to say. Guess I’ll find out, though. I liked that response. . . . Kana’s coming off as a bit of a martyr to me. . . . Interesting ending. Wake up and smell the jutsu smoke, Kakashi!
Let’s hope this will go well. It’d be bad for someone to overreact and just jump right in and interrupt.
Dude, that’s not funny, Itachi! Jeezus! õ_õ . . . . (*to your question*) Oh! OH! I see where this is going now! =DD
Chapter 45 again. 9_9
Love that whole first paragraph. ^^ . . . . I don’t blame you for being worried, Iruka, but don’t count the chickens just yet. . . . Is Kakashi really oblivious to the cause of Iruka’s anxiety? . . . . Must’ve been a lot of work to heal Obito. He was buried in a freakin’ rockslide, for crying out loud. . . . I like the details to Obito’s treatment.
I like this discussion and the reason for Obito’s irritation. . . . Very well-done argument. . . . Wait a minute, Obito’s abused? Dang. o_o . . . . Hey, do I see an echo of the argument that Sasuke and Naruto had at the Valley? . . . . This is an awesome scene! =D . . . . Awww, so sweet. :heart: . . . . You know, this might be the first Kakashi scene that I’ve liked (when it comes to adult stuff, you know). . . . (*snort*) “. . . I can’t believe you just said that.” XDD . . . . Wow, GREAT scene! I like how it ended! And I probably would’ve still liked it if they had gone all the way! Good job! =DDD And I also like how they subtly planned stuff for the next night and it wasn’t too blatantly obvious. I had to remember that the next night never happened. Really well-done. ^_^
Good first line, Obito. . . . “Kakashi laughed, ‘I’ll bet that was fun.’” XDD . . . . “Long past midnight,” wow. Understandable too. Iruka’s not going to be too happy, though. . . . Aww, poor Iruka. This also had a very nice description, this scene.
I wonder why they’re all looking cowed; is Iruka being scary? . . . . Well, that answers that. Nice one, Iruka, growling at Sasuke like that. ^_^ And Sasuke, you need to lighten up and give her a chance. . . . Cute, Kana offering to help and Iruka gently saying “No thanks.” I like Iruka’s line, I can hear him saying it. ^_^ . . . . So Iruka gets feisty when he’s jealous, eh? Heheh. . . . XD “Give Gaara a run for his money,” yikes. XD . . . . Sasuke, can you possibly be any more subtle? (*sarcasm*) . . . . I do like his line: “I think that your empathy [. . .] danger she could be.” I like the reasoning, and not just jumping right to it. . . . Naruto has a good counter-reason as well. . . . Say, when did Naruto hear about Obito’s story? . . . . “I have a mission to get to.” I wonder if that’s Sasuke’s way of giving in, or if he’s just being a stubborn ass. Hard to say. Guess I’ll find out, though. I liked that response. . . . Kana’s coming off as a bit of a martyr to me. . . . Interesting ending. Wake up and smell the jutsu smoke, Kakashi!
Let’s hope this will go well. It’d be bad for someone to overreact and just jump right in and interrupt.
Dude, that’s not funny, Itachi! Jeezus! õ_õ . . . . (*to your question*) Oh! OH! I see where this is going now! =DD
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 47: O.O That . . . was . . . random. Õ_Ô
(*snort*) Oh, Hinata. 9_9 . . . . Ahahaha, talk about being seriously startled! XD (*after reading Hinata’s apology to Kana*) . . . . Judging from Kana’s style, she and Hinata should be pretty good working together, I’d think. . . . Maybe she’s got ‘Rochi-kun’s intelligence if not his personality.
Oh shit, Anko. õ_õ . . . . It’d be kind of interesting if Kana’s phobic about snakes. =) . . . . Well, that went well. ô_ô . . . . Well, so far more and more people have been accepting Kana without too much of a problem. I wonder if a bomb’s going to drop sometime.
HUH?! Sai and . . . you’re kidding me?! O.O (Actually, I like this idea. One of the best pairings I’ve seen in this fic.) . . . . (*snort*) Funny, Sai being “a screamer.” Hard to imagine. ^^ . . . . Ooh, good idea, Sai! I can totally see Obito as a teacher! =D (Though Iruka’s going to be on edge if things don’t get sorted out soon.)
Hmm, I like Sasuke’s thoughts on Naruto’s words and the situation with Kana. . . . I also like how he didn’t just say, “You’re right and I was wrong,” right off the bat. I like to see progress, but slow progress is great. ^_^ . . . . So “avenger” has become “former avenger.” Nice subtlety. ^_^ . . . . Way to break up the mood, Obito! X3
Oh, I forgot about how Itachi might take the news. X3 . . . . Hell yeah! Itachi OWNZ ‘Rochi-kun! XD . . . . I like your analysis about seme/uke, but I have to agree with Sai on this one. Sorry ‘bout that. (*sweat*) I think it can be pretty hot when the younger guy is the seme, even to an older seme-type. ^^;
(*snort*) Oh, Hinata. 9_9 . . . . Ahahaha, talk about being seriously startled! XD (*after reading Hinata’s apology to Kana*) . . . . Judging from Kana’s style, she and Hinata should be pretty good working together, I’d think. . . . Maybe she’s got ‘Rochi-kun’s intelligence if not his personality.
Oh shit, Anko. õ_õ . . . . It’d be kind of interesting if Kana’s phobic about snakes. =) . . . . Well, that went well. ô_ô . . . . Well, so far more and more people have been accepting Kana without too much of a problem. I wonder if a bomb’s going to drop sometime.
HUH?! Sai and . . . you’re kidding me?! O.O (Actually, I like this idea. One of the best pairings I’ve seen in this fic.) . . . . (*snort*) Funny, Sai being “a screamer.” Hard to imagine. ^^ . . . . Ooh, good idea, Sai! I can totally see Obito as a teacher! =D (Though Iruka’s going to be on edge if things don’t get sorted out soon.)
Hmm, I like Sasuke’s thoughts on Naruto’s words and the situation with Kana. . . . I also like how he didn’t just say, “You’re right and I was wrong,” right off the bat. I like to see progress, but slow progress is great. ^_^ . . . . So “avenger” has become “former avenger.” Nice subtlety. ^_^ . . . . Way to break up the mood, Obito! X3
Oh, I forgot about how Itachi might take the news. X3 . . . . Hell yeah! Itachi OWNZ ‘Rochi-kun! XD . . . . I like your analysis about seme/uke, but I have to agree with Sai on this one. Sorry ‘bout that. (*sweat*) I think it can be pretty hot when the younger guy is the seme, even to an older seme-type. ^^;
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 48 47: XD Love your dialogue with Itachi. ^^ . . . . XDDD It just gets funnier! . . . . (*starts chanting*) “They’re coming to take me away, ha-haa, they’re coming to take me away, ha-haa . . .” >w< . . . . And I still don’t approve of most of those pairings! >.< . . . .
Chapter 47 yet again. (Make up your mind, already.) 9_9
“Hideous genetic heritage?” I dunno, I think it looks kinda eerie. :heart: . . . . Love the line, “She’s kinda like a shyer me.” Totally. . . . Okay, forgive me for being a bit of a conformist, but that dog-shit was filler-only and a bad idea. Naruto’s really not that dumb/clutzy in the manga (at least I don’t think so). (I don’t know why the anime put so much gross stuff in there.) . . . . (*snicker*) Love the discussion about “Uchiha” and its synonyms. ^^ . . . . “In other words he’ll never warm up to Kana.” I’m hoping that he does after a very long period. =) . . . . It’s been a month already? Wow. Time flies.
Oh jeez, those two arguing. X3 . . . . Smooth, Kana. . . . Yay, she gots a boyfriend! ^_^
Holy cow! Kakashi, WAKE UP, dammit! And Iruka, LIGHTEN UP! Oy! (Idiots.) õ_õ . . . . Heh. Trust Sasuke to state what’s on his mind so bluntly. ^^ . . . . LOL, everybody’s reactions all at once! That’d make a great doujin page! XDDD . . . . Hmm, I like Iruka’s line: “For Kami-sama’s sake [. . .]” I agree with him, Kakashi; that is none of your business, friend or not. . . . Iruka kinda reminds me of me. I say things partway, and then just don’t want to bring it up again. (Though Iruka probably will talk about it some more.) . . . . Err, I like Sakura urging Kakashi on, but the way she said it: “Go after your man, Kakashi, before you lose him!” sounded . . . odd to me. I think it was the “your man” part. (*sweat*) . . . . LOL!! “Love makes the most intelligent people into idiots and stupid people into brainless monkeys.” XDDDD . . . . Oh HELL YEAH! You tell him, Sasuke! =DDDDD
Ooh, ouch. Love that line: “Iruka pulled his fist back and clocked Kakashi.” So quick. . . . The fight looks . . . strange in my mind’s eye. ô_o . . . . I love Iruka’s reason for his feistiness. . . . Awww, Kakashi’s confession! :heart: . . . . Kakashi acting like Gai? Scary. o_o . . . . Aww, so cute. (And now I’m going to have to squint for this scene. =_=) . . . . Love the growled line, “You’re playing with fire, Iruka.” I can hear Kakashi saying it. . . . And I like the response as well. . . . Oh boy, I can feel another clean part of my unpure mind breaking. =_=
I guess that was evil. I don’t really mind it, though. Actually, you’re just living up to your name, right? “Truly Wicked”? ^_^ . . . . Huh, I’ve never heard of that series. I’ll have to check it out. . . . Episodes 3 and 1, got it. (*goes to watch YouTube*)
Chapter 47 yet again. (Make up your mind, already.) 9_9
“Hideous genetic heritage?” I dunno, I think it looks kinda eerie. :heart: . . . . Love the line, “She’s kinda like a shyer me.” Totally. . . . Okay, forgive me for being a bit of a conformist, but that dog-shit was filler-only and a bad idea. Naruto’s really not that dumb/clutzy in the manga (at least I don’t think so). (I don’t know why the anime put so much gross stuff in there.) . . . . (*snicker*) Love the discussion about “Uchiha” and its synonyms. ^^ . . . . “In other words he’ll never warm up to Kana.” I’m hoping that he does after a very long period. =) . . . . It’s been a month already? Wow. Time flies.
Oh jeez, those two arguing. X3 . . . . Smooth, Kana. . . . Yay, she gots a boyfriend! ^_^
Holy cow! Kakashi, WAKE UP, dammit! And Iruka, LIGHTEN UP! Oy! (Idiots.) õ_õ . . . . Heh. Trust Sasuke to state what’s on his mind so bluntly. ^^ . . . . LOL, everybody’s reactions all at once! That’d make a great doujin page! XDDD . . . . Hmm, I like Iruka’s line: “For Kami-sama’s sake [. . .]” I agree with him, Kakashi; that is none of your business, friend or not. . . . Iruka kinda reminds me of me. I say things partway, and then just don’t want to bring it up again. (Though Iruka probably will talk about it some more.) . . . . Err, I like Sakura urging Kakashi on, but the way she said it: “Go after your man, Kakashi, before you lose him!” sounded . . . odd to me. I think it was the “your man” part. (*sweat*) . . . . LOL!! “Love makes the most intelligent people into idiots and stupid people into brainless monkeys.” XDDDD . . . . Oh HELL YEAH! You tell him, Sasuke! =DDDDD
Ooh, ouch. Love that line: “Iruka pulled his fist back and clocked Kakashi.” So quick. . . . The fight looks . . . strange in my mind’s eye. ô_o . . . . I love Iruka’s reason for his feistiness. . . . Awww, Kakashi’s confession! :heart: . . . . Kakashi acting like Gai? Scary. o_o . . . . Aww, so cute. (And now I’m going to have to squint for this scene. =_=) . . . . Love the growled line, “You’re playing with fire, Iruka.” I can hear Kakashi saying it. . . . And I like the response as well. . . . Oh boy, I can feel another clean part of my unpure mind breaking. =_=
I guess that was evil. I don’t really mind it, though. Actually, you’re just living up to your name, right? “Truly Wicked”? ^_^ . . . . Huh, I’ve never heard of that series. I’ll have to check it out. . . . Episodes 3 and 1, got it. (*goes to watch YouTube*)
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 49: (*still laughing from watching that series*) XDDDD Love the part in ep 1 when Deidara comes in. XDDD And ep 2! Itachi’s reaction to Bleach! XDDDD And-and then . . . *Pfft* Automatic door. . . ! (*dies laughing*) Oh, but that last part made me sad. T_T
(*deep breath*) H’okay, I can do this. (Hey, where are Itachi and Sai?)
XD “Damn it, Iruka, I wanted this to last.” Good line. X3 . . . . õ_- . . . . (*snort*) Love how Iruka’s all “That does it,” and gets busy. X3 . . . . Love how Iruka’s all “Grrr.” ^^ . . . . At least they’re not in a too public place, otherwise they could get in trouble for indecent exposure at the least. (*sweat*) . . . . They’re not gonna fall asleep out there, are they? (*sweat*)
LOL, Iruka and Obito exchanging stories! X3 . . . . Oh no, poor Kana. . . . O.O Shit, this is bad. Who the hell is this nutjob? I wonder if Kana defending the kids will clear her identity a little more.
Oh, so that’s the nutcase. I always tend to forget about him. 9_9 . . . . Wait, did Naruto just have a vision? Cool. Must be a Kyuubi thing. Nicely done.
Yeah, if this doesn’t clear her with Sasuke, I don’t know what will. . . . Lol, “Correction, brat: I’m here.” ^^ . . . . Yup, that cleared it. Hmm, I kinda wish the distrusting thing was shown a little more before this moment, but that’s okay.
XD There you guys are. Love Itachi’s concern. ^^
(*deep breath*) H’okay, I can do this. (Hey, where are Itachi and Sai?)
XD “Damn it, Iruka, I wanted this to last.” Good line. X3 . . . . õ_- . . . . (*snort*) Love how Iruka’s all “That does it,” and gets busy. X3 . . . . Love how Iruka’s all “Grrr.” ^^ . . . . At least they’re not in a too public place, otherwise they could get in trouble for indecent exposure at the least. (*sweat*) . . . . They’re not gonna fall asleep out there, are they? (*sweat*)
LOL, Iruka and Obito exchanging stories! X3 . . . . Oh no, poor Kana. . . . O.O Shit, this is bad. Who the hell is this nutjob? I wonder if Kana defending the kids will clear her identity a little more.
Oh, so that’s the nutcase. I always tend to forget about him. 9_9 . . . . Wait, did Naruto just have a vision? Cool. Must be a Kyuubi thing. Nicely done.
Yeah, if this doesn’t clear her with Sasuke, I don’t know what will. . . . Lol, “Correction, brat: I’m here.” ^^ . . . . Yup, that cleared it. Hmm, I kinda wish the distrusting thing was shown a little more before this moment, but that’s okay.
XD There you guys are. Love Itachi’s concern. ^^