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Chapter 38: O.O Knew it would happen at an inopportune moment: when Sasuke’s not there. >_< . . . . “Ri?” Who’s Ri? . . . . Oh! Nice to meet you! ^^ . . . . “Wrinkle boy?” x_x I prefer “weasel-boy,” thank you very much. (*sweat*) Actually, I think those lines under Itachi’s eyes are cute. In an, uh (*eyes darting nervously to Itachi*), um, very manly and sexy way that, uh, is – uh -- perfect for -- for -- for making an erotic and/or scary scene! ^_^; Heh. Um, I’ll be over there. >_>;;;; . . . . Don’t worry about the mistakes, I’m pretty sure a lot of us here are virgins. Um . . . yeah. (*hides in corner again*) >_>;;;;;

(*snort*) That -- that -- Warning! X3
It’s kinda funny how Sasuke’s the one giving signals on a team with Kakashi and Shikamaru. I wonder how he got that position. ^^ . . . . That’s funny, the guy doesn’t know Sasuke. Boy didn’t do his research, did he? . . . . Luv this: “Who are you?” “None of your business.” ^^ . . . . This guy sounds so corny. Sorry, but his lines are so . . . heard. . . . Nicely played with Hinata. I’m usually pretty picky about her when she gets tough or assertive (it’s kind of hard to get it just right), but this is pretty good. I like how Kakashi introduced it. . . . Owwwwch! >.< That -- has -- got -- to -- hurt. (Well, Kakashi did warn him. *sweat*) . . . . Sasuke’s awesome when he’s angry. :heart: . . . . Oh, such drama, Sasuke. It would’ve been pretty cool anyway even if you hadn’t told the man your name.
Yeezus, it just occurred to me: the guys aren’t going to have to be looking after 3 babies anymore, but four! They’re going to run out of diapers before the week is out! O_O . . . . How worried is Naruto about Sasuke, considering that the guy has been gone for a month? . . . . That is kind of ironic. “All you have to do is pick her up and she settles down.” I guess from one to another with energy. ^^ . . . . And I still think you should switch to Lee, Sakura! õ_õ . . . . Uh-oh. . . . Interesting reaction from Naruto. ô_o
Um, I think you mean “vicious contraction,” not “viscous.” (*sweat*) . . . . It’s all right for her to tell Naruto to “push” and he may have a birth canal, but can he feel the muscles there, now? Cuz if he doesn’t, will he know what/where to push? õ_ô . . . . Aww. ó_ò Poor guy. . . . “Paler than usual,” eh? Understandable. He probably looks a little sick. . . . LOL, “Shit, fuck, AND hell.” XDD Good one. . . . Wrong thing to say, Sasuke. “It can’t be that bad?” Jerk. ¬_¬ . . . . Hah! He gotcha back, Sasuke. ^^ . . . . Jeezus, that was some threat. O_O;;; . . . . Man, that’s gotta be disheartening: “We’ll have the first one out.” So now you have to go through this about 2 more times. Eesh, poor guy. õ_o . . . . Wha? Sasuke cut it? I think that’s a little wrong. 9_-
Man, this is just going on! o_o . . . . Heheh, I like Sasuke’s line about the second kid. I guess the first one will take more after him, though. ^_^ . . . . (*giggle*) And I love Naruto’s point about Sasuke being loud when he wants to be. Very true. ^_^ . . . . Feet first? That’s a little unusual, but it happens a lot. . . . Heh. “Hell no, you manipulative ass.” Love how Naruto knows what Sasuke’s doing and states it. ^_^ . . . . O_O Shit, this could be bad. . . . (*whew*) Thank God. -_-;;; (*blinks*) “Indignantly?” X3 . . . . Aww, so cute! X3 She looks like her, uh, blonde daddy (not going to say “mommy” >_< .). . . . The middle child sure is . . . strange. Is that hair even possible? It’s kind of interesting how if you line the children next to each other, it’s like a fade of Uchiha to Uzumaki. The middle child seems to have his brunette daddy’s seriousness and his blonde daddy’s lungs. ^^ I wonder if that’s really just the case or if there might be something . . . off. Hmmm. . . . Aww, cute names. :heart:

Huh? Newborns have blue eyes? I’ve never heard of that. õ_ô . . . . Oh! I learned something new today! ^_^ . . . . And thanks for the clarification for the story with Akuma.

Chapter 39: Why is your muse so crabby? . . . . Good luck, Sai.

Like what Kyuubi has to say about the kids. Also, I agree with both him and Naruto when it comes to Naruto (not) using his enhanced senses on a more regular basis. . . . Ooh, he got you with that one, Naruto. Maybe it would be a good excuse to use them now. . . . (*giggle*) Cute touch about the kid grabbing Sasuke’s hair. ^^ . . . . XD Love Naruto’s impression and how Sasuke’s embarrassed. XD
Oy, Sasuke, don’t swear around kids! ò_ó . . . . Eww, that’s gross. (Probably happens a lot, but I don’t care. >_< .) . . . . Okay, why is Naruto reluctant to say “penis?” õ_ô . . . . (Oh, hey, Sasuke noticed that, too.) . . . . I wonder how Mikomi might feel in years to come when she doesn’t have the senses that her siblings have. . . . Oh my, extra observation, I know where this is going. 6_^ . . . . Guess not. Ah well, that’s fine. (((Err, you spelled “Sakura” with as “Sajura”.))) Triple ceremony?? Jeez, I’ve never heard of that one before. o_o
I guess that’s a hazard of having a bunch of babies in one room -- but then, they can’t exactly have one room per kid. How the hell are they going to calm them all down? õ_o . . . . Uhh, I’m confused about the breast pump/Sasuke sleeping/Naruto feeding/etc. Please explain? . . . . Great idea, Naruto. But it’d still be less privacy, darn it. . . . “Sasuke smirked. [. . .] can be.’” Hopefully it won’t be a breeze with Kakashi. And hopefully Kakashi won’t bug Naruto and Sasuke with stupid stuff later. >_< . . . . Ooh-hu-hu-hu, I luuuv the “wickedly calculating expression.” (*rubs hands together maliciously*)

Yeah, I know about that wing. Seriously. Although I just can’t get over how it didn’t affect Sasuke’s back in his normal form and at the same time not grow back later. :\ (If you ask me, I like the thing Zrina put in The Sound of Dreams about that sort of issue.) “And I think Deidara has Itachi issues.” (*snort*) Oh really, you think?! XD . . . . Oh hey, Itachi. Love your line. ^_^ . . . . At least Ri’s happy. (*sweat*) . . . . I’m pretty sure that Itachi can lie damn well when he wants something bad enough. X3 (Don’t get me wrong, his affection for Sai is probably genuine, but I still can’t rule it out.)

Chapter 40: XD Sai’s antics. (Sorry, TW, he’s just too funny. I hope it didn’t hurt too badly. Actually, never mind -- I know it must’ve hurt like hell. >.< .)

Oh good, the revenge is successful! XD . . . . Duhhh, Kakashi. XD . . . . I hope he’s not grinning due to a new counter-revenge he just thought up.
Love how Hinata’s giggling at Naruto like this. ^^ . . . . Interesting idea. ô_ô
(*thinks for a moment after reading the first paragraph*) . . . AHAHAHAHA!! XDDDD You’re right, Iruka, that is funny! ^^
Love Sasuke’s slight frustration.
Kakashi? “Baby-phobic?” I think I just made a new friend. ^^; . . . . Love Iruka’s line: “Not that I’m complaining, but why isn’t the house a disaster?” XD . . . . (*snort*) Iruka’s laughing at Kakashi. XDD . . . . (*snicker*) I wonder if Kakashi had been hoping Iruka would promise something else instead of “time to make dinner” (though I’m not complaining that he didn’t, thank heavens).
Love how Kakashi and Iruka are just taking in the scene. ^_^

Oh, so there is going to be a shower fight. I wonder if it’ll lead into anything else. . . ? . . . . Darn it, TW, that was hypothetical! Quit answering and spoiling the story, damn it. õ_õ . . . . (*after looking at picture*) Carbon-copies, scary. o_o How is it that they all resemble one person each with no mixture? õ_ô

Chapter 41 43: I know how you feel about the whole Tobi/Obito/Madara thing. Actually my first response to seeing Tobi like that was, “. . . what did Deidara’s explosion do to him??” ^^; . . . . I like Itachi in this scene. ^^

Huh? 43? How’d it jump to that?? o.O . . . . (Hey, does Naruto still have that birth canal?) . . . . Heheh, loved the sexy scene that got interrupted. ^^
Love Iruka’s quiet threat. For some reason I can totally see him issuing it. ô_ô
Oh, for God’s sake, Naruto, I would’ve thought Iruka would’ve had all that stuff covered anyway! You suggested him because of that sort of thing, after all! õ_o
Ooh, goodie! =D (*leans forward eagerly*) . . . . Mmm, nice and slow. . . . Hopefully this won’t be the only time of NaruSasu.

YES, that WAS evil!! How could you?! ò_ó . . . . (*snort*) Love Sai’s innuendo that gets both him and Itachi laughing. XD

Chapter 44: Heh. Love your dialogue with Itachi. =)

Mmm, nice. . . . Yeah, this scene is really well-done. . . . Ooh, that’s mean, Naruto. =) . . . . Wow, never heard the word “screw” as this type of description. I mean, I’ve heard it as a reference to sex, but not quite like this. =) . . . . Man, this scene is great. Love the slight touch of Sasuke taking a little bit of initiative as well. . . . O.O . . . . This . . . was probably the hottest scene I’ve seen yet in this story. =D
Obito alive? Wow. I wonder what Kakashi’s going to say. I wonder how the hell he survived that landslide-thing. õ_ô . . . . Huh? Who is this girl? Is it Rin? And does Tsunade know her? õ_õ

Love the whole dialogue between you three. ^_^

Chapter 37: (*snort*) That interaction between you and Itachi is hilarious. XD

Heh. Love the “Last Time:”. Nice touch. Perfect for a TV show and stuff. ^^
Wh-wh-what? Hold on, back up. >_< What was that? That was, like, totally random. õ_ô And, uh, what is Itachi (next to you) going to say about this? (All this came after reading only the first paragraph.) . . . . Green eyes. Uh-oh. . . . . (Oh, never mind about that.) But . . . married? O_O . . . . For some weird reason . . . I totally believe that letter. I mean, I can hear it coming from him. The hell. õ_ô . . . . Hard to think that Sasuke has a niece. Wow. o_o . . . . This is a neat scene, seeing Sasuke like this. . . . Wait a minute here. Green eyes. Surprisingly strong grip. Hmmm. Is she related to someone we know?
And a healer to boot. Any other peculiar similarities? . . . . After the latest chapter I read of Naruto, I can picture this pretty well. . . . I wonder what this new character’s story is with the Sharingan.
Aww, Sasuke “pulled Naruto down onto the sofa, and told him everything.” :heart: . . . . You had BETTER come out of this okay, Sasuke, I mean it! ò_ó . . . . And Naruto means it too! . . . . Ohh, this was a good line: “I hear you. I’ll be back, usuratonkachi, even if I have to fight my way out of hell.” =DDD . . . . Wow. That ending paragraph with Iruka was really cool.

(*snicker*) Itachi’s first reaction. X3 Now that you mention it, Itachi, it is kind of a bummer. . . . Haha, TW, you got your butt saved by the fox. ^^ . . . . Awww, Itachi hurt Sai’s feelings. :heart: So cute. ^^

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Chapter 35: Oh man, power-outage. (*groans*) Something similar happened to me once. It had to do with reviewing a really good chapter. XP . . . . Yeah, Juugo sure looked awesome in that. . . . Man, you’ve got to do a fic with those three (if you haven’t already). It sounds way too good to not read about.

All those presents. Must be belated apologies for their behavior over the years. . . . A-cup. Not bad. (Thank God. *sweat*) . . . . Leave him alone, Sakura. . . . Thank you, Sakura. (I think I’ll sit with you and drool a little as well.)
Huh. I never thought of names within the Uchiha family. Simple yet clever. =) . . . . I wonder what the other Uchiha names were like. õ_ô . . . . Heh. “No turning this into an insult competition.” Cute. . . . “She’s scary when she’s in a shopping mood.” XD Good one. ^^
Hmm, Naruto’s a little offset right now. I wonder if he’s about to go into labor (I know it’s still early -- I think). . . . That’s cute, what Sasuke’s telling about the rooms’ histories. . . . Having read chapter 397 before I read this chapter, it makes Sasuke’s view on Itachi less farfetched or weird than I most likely would’ve found it had I read it beforehand. . . . Awww, love-love. :heart:

I thought it was cute. (*giggle*) Yeah, Itachi, he pities you. ^^ . . . . Hmm, so . . . who’s playing who in that game? ^^

Chapter 36: Yaaay, love “weasel-boy!” ^^ XD . . . . No, I can’t say I was reminded of Sakura from back then. But now that you mention it . . . I kinda see it. . . . Naah, I was too worried about Sasuke to hope for much damage.

“Dragged Sasuke away to a bar.” XD Party for the guys I take it? Late bachelor party? ^^ . . . . I like Kakashi’s support for Naruto -- wait. I DON’T want to know what Iruka promised! >_< . . . . “Body shots?” ?_? . . . . So far we’ve got two cribs. I wonder if everyone had a meeting about deciding who got what. Imagine if they’d got one too many cribs for Naruto’s children. ^^ . . . . (*counts*) I see 4 so far. That’s one too many. . . . (*chokes*) You -- you -- you had Ibiki give a gift?? Furthermore, it was THAT?? O.O . . . . Ewww, Ino’s gift. XP . . . . Yeah, Anko, you’ve got a point, but they don’t need encouragement! XD . . . . I guess the “no toy guns” restriction doesn’t apply in the ninjaverse when it comes to “no kunai or shuriken.” Although if you ask me, I think it’s highly inappropriate to give babies those kinds of weapons, even toy weapons, unless they’re like rubbing ones for teething or something. . . . It’s a good thing they’re all giving out diapers, cuz that’s something they’re definitely going to need. ^^ . . . . Oooooh. Excellent, Kakashi, I like it. =D . . . . For once, I like Iruka’s look at Kakashi. ^_^ (I wonder if he’s going to top this time. Not that I wanna see, just wondering.)
I like how Sakura said, “Thanks for indulging us girls.” That’s sweet. ^_^ . . . . Uh, duh, Sasuke. And probably a lot more than what you’ve got here. I’m pretty sure all of those diapers wouldn’t even last through one babyhood, much less three at the same time. (*sweat*)
Uh-oh, he’s having a fit of some sorts. . . . Love how Sasuke’s just kind of, “Okay, just coooool down, we’ll work this out.” It’s sweet. ^_^ . . . . Heh. “Sasuke watched horrified as Naruto’s tears increased.” X3 . . . . Heh, Sasuke’s just all *sweat*sweat*sweat*. ^^
Holy jeez, those’re a lot of cravings. ô_ô . . . . “Naruto brought out the deadly [. . .] trudged to an all-night market.” Poor guy. ó_ò
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“I thought it was time for a cliffie.” A cliffie. A -- cliffie. . . . YOU CALL THAT MERELY “A CLIFFIE?!” THAT WAS TOTALLY RANDOM! XDDDDDDDD . . . . Wha? Hey, Itachi tops Kyuubi too? No way. Okay, I admit it could happen, but Kyuubi’s got to be doing waaaay more topping of Itachi than vice-versa. . . . Your mom is in on all this?? O.O

Chapter 30: I’ve never been to a wedding before, much less helped with one. . . . Oh yeah, I forgot, the characters are getting married as well. So really you were helping with 3 weddings. ^^

I have a tough time picturing Naruto in a tux. o.O . . . . Good idea; that would’ve just been too weird if Naruto really took on the role of a “bride.” >_< . . . . Tsunade makes a pretty good minister. ^^ . . . . Nicely done, Sasuke. =) . . . . Also nicely done, Naruto. =) . . . . LOL, Gai and Lee! XDD . . . . Ooh, pretty! (If you ask me, I like the onyx-and-topaz one better. . . . Love the glare Tsunade’s sending around. ^^ . . . . Ah -- knew there would be one out there. (There always is.) 9_9 . . . . I wonder if someone’s going to make trouble for them later. That’d be kind of interesting.

I think you did a good job with the vows! Those were the best parts! =D . . . . Shut it, Itachi. . . . Oy, Itachi sure has a bondage fetish, doesn’t he? ^^ (I’d love to see Sasuke tie him up sometime. 6_^)