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Chapter 31 32: “I value my life far too much.” o.O You live dangerously as it is. . . . In my dreams, Sai, and only in my dreams. If he did that to me for real, I’d go clinically mad with trauma. XD

Will you please get all these chapters straightened out? It makes reviewing very confusing. T_T
Interesting about the “tradition” Sakura mentioned. I’m kinda playing with the idea of Naruto saying “Screw tradition” or something. ^^ . . . . Ahahaha! “Sasuke can’t lead a dance to save his life.” XDD . . . . Well, I want you, Sakura, to dance with Lee! (still irked about that) ò_ó . . . . Love this line: “I still can’t figure out why you can follow in a dance so gracefully but trip over your own feet when you try to lead.” So they’ve danced together a couple times? I wish I could’ve seen that. :heart: I wonder if Sasuke can’t lead due to nerves or if he’s just better at copying. ← Oh. There’s my answer right there. ^_^ . . . . o.O Sasuke’s sure talking about Itachi lightly. Though that is kind of funny. (Itachi, are you reading this? XD) . . . . I just said that, Naruto. X3 . . . . (*amused at the cake-cutting*) . . . . Oh, wow! My comment about “Screw tradition” up there 9_9 actually happened in a variation! “You two never do anything the usual way, do you?” “What would be the point?”) =D . . . . (*snort*) Nice one, Kiba. XD . . . . Ooh-la-la, Sasuke’s groping Naruto. 6_6 You can wait, Sasuke, you’re married now! ^^ . . . . Alcohol, eh? I wonder how much Tsunade’s having. And, awww, those guys are just going to sneak out without goodbyes? ó_ò . . . . Sasuke’s totally cool with the hug, then? (It seemed not long ago that he was all jumped up about it, whatever the circumstances.)
Jeez, Naruto couldn’t figure that out about them soaking together (whatever Sasuke’s intents)? õ_õ He himself made the observation of the tub being big enough for several people. . . . Ooh, now that’s a cliffie!

I know what Itachi hates you for. (*points to the review above*) . . . . HAH! Knew it! XD . . . . “Because if you do she’ll never update What You Want.” Or anything else for that matter.

Chapter 33: Where did the other two disappear to? The bedroom?

O.O . . . . I was totally absorbed, I didn’t have much to say. That was hot. That’s all I can think of to describe it. =) (The scenes are getting better, but they still could go even slower. As it is, they’re kind of . . . teasers.) ^_^; . . . . O.O “Money doesn’t grow on trees, teme. I had to make money somehow before I became a ninja [. . .]” O.O Whoa, you scared me for a minute there, Naruto, before I read the rest of the paragraph. For a second there, I thought you were talking about prostitution! O.O; . . . . (*snort*) That’s kinda cute. “How do I put this tactfully? It sucks.” . . . . Well, don’t rush to get out of bed, you guys. You neither, Naruto.
Ooh, I like this scene with Neji. . . . XD Kiba’s got some great entrances in this story. . . . SHE SHOCKED GAARA!! THAT’S WORTH A PICTURE! XDDD . . . . Yay, the quick guy-hug! =D . . . . I love Kiba in this scene! He’s great! Such awesome lines! XD

Oh, there they are. Hey, Itachi, Sai, where were you guys when the chapter started? . . . . This chapter was great. Nice hot scene, and I loved the scene with Gaara, Kiba and the Hyuugas. ^_^

Chapter 33: You know, I never thought of that line as an understatement. So when you said that and I checked out that page, I cracked up at the new outlook of it. XD . . . . (*ahem*) LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! (Hope this doesn’t stretch the page more than it already is.) It looks better when it’s bold! Oy! . . . . Well, it doesn’t give me that desire! >_< . . . . Obvious, really? I kinda figured that it would ultimately lead down to going after Itachi, but I was wondering if he had more steps planned ahead. Something Death Note-esque, if you know what I mean. But no, it was pretty much straightforward. . . . I really liked Juugo too. He’s my favorite of the trio. Kimimaro kind of scared me (squeamish), but I like the way he looks; kind of shaman-like. I never thought of him befriending Naruto, though. That might make interesting fanfic material. . . . Heh. Love Sai’s lines about the nicknames. ^^ . . . . “Tell you after the chapter.” I’ll be waiting. (O.O Longest review to A/N on this fic I’ve ever done!)

“Chapter 33.” Again.
XD This whole line is great: “Shikamaru and Chouji looked at each other, and the Nara said, ‘I do not want to know why Naruto is so irritated.’” I can so picture that scene! XD . . . . I don’t think I’ll ever approve of some of these pairings. -_-;
Love Tsunade’s thought when Naruto and Sasuke come in. Man, what an understatement. (Did that manga chapter inspire that? ^^) . . . . O.O (*falls off the chair in shock at Naruto’s revelation*) @_@ (*dazedly*) Guess that answers the question about how Naruto’s going to give birth. (Ow, that hurt. . . .) . . . . Good luck, Sasuke.
Jeez, barely a couple of days (weeks?) and they’re already having a lovers’ spat. . . . Whoa, love the fainting thing. . . . Ooh, love Naruto’s use of the word “unbreakable.” =D . . . . Sasuke calling himself a “twit?” (*amused*) Never thought I’d hear that. =) . . . . Do pregnant people swell that early on?
Oh mannnn, (*groans*), I DON”T want to look at Naruto’s vagina. XP . . . . “Crab-walking?” (*snicker*) . . . . Naruto’s got way more nerve than I do. . . . “Well, that’s interesting.” And Tsunade’s infuriating. ^^ . . . . I’m glad you used that term instead of -- of -- of the one I mentioned up there. 9_9 (Don’t know why I can’t say it now.) . . . . Oh my God, you guys! You honestly didn’t know what it was?! I know you guys aren’t totally dumb, so what the heck! I’m sure you could’ve figured it out! Oy! õ_õ . . . . I wonder if this is going to be permanent. God, I hope not. ¬_¬ . . . . The insistence in the dialogue between Tsunade and Sasuke gives me the feeling that there’s probably going to be difficulties about this. . . . (*snort*) “Naruto nudged Sasuke with a hip. ‘Oi, teme, I’m hungry. Feed me?’” XDD Great line.

Nice! . . . . Got that right about the legality of Itachi’s sexiness. (Kind of ironic, too, in a way.) ^^
(*snicker*) You serious about that typo? ^^ XD (*breaks down into muffled hysterical giggles*)

Chapter 34: What’s this about a special guest?? . . . . The “number and gender?” I was expecting the second part, but the first?? It never occurred to me there could be more than one! O.O

“Nesting?” I’ve never heard of that one. Yeesh. o_o . . . . Yeesh, I hope it’s not a freakin’ litter. They’re going to have their work cut out as it is. . . . (*gasp*) Kiba! ò_ó . . . . I’m surprised too, Sasuke. . . . Now they’re engaged. (*sigh*) -_- . . . . “Food crises.” Knew something would happen. . . . I wonder what the significance of popcorn is. . . . (*giggle*) Love Naruto’s re-entrance line. ^^ . . . . Oh, they got married?! Cool! =D . . . . I . . . don’t want to see a picture of a pregnant Naruto with breasts. x_x . . . . Oh, now, that’s mean, Tsunade. (This fic is starting to scar my poor mind. T_T) Please at least let him have his dignity with whatever they decide to get him as bras. T_T . . . . (*just read the number*) Holy cow. . . . (*snort*) “Way too much information.” That’s what I thought, Naruto. XD . . . . Uhh, forgive me for saying so, but I thought the last couple of lines were a little . . . um, yeah. Sorry.
Yay, Sasuke to the rescue. You tell her, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Why the heck are those three so clueless right now? õ_ô . . . . Boy, Sasuke’s strong. =)

Heeeeeeyyy!! Nice to see you! (*to TW*) Love the guest star. =D Anything with him in it is exxxxcellent, mwahahahaha. =D . . . . TW, I WANT DETAILED DESCRIPTIONS IN A FIC, I MEAN IT!!

Chapter 25: (Back on track with the chapters. Nice.) Nice entrance, Sai. XD . . . . (I like Sai’s puzzlement over tears of happiness. ^^) . . . . Who said I don’t want to see?! Of course I want to see! Who do you take me for?!? (XD)

Heh. Love the opening scene. ^^ And I love this line: “Sasuke knew a rhetorical question when he heard one and deigned not to answer in spite of his twitching eyebrow.” XD . . . . I wonder (dread) if Sasuke screwed up on anything in the forms in his impatience to get out of there and do Naruto. =) . . . . Oh, I dunno about Naruto “receiving nothing but hatred and disgust.” He’s gotten quite some admiration during the chuunin exams, I’d say. . . . Poor Naruto’s scared. Awww. . . . Uh-oh, groupies. (The worst.) . . . . Jeezus, don’t these girls know the guy’s taken?! Gawd! õ_õ . . . . Hah! You tell ‘em, Sasuke! =D
Awww, cute. :heart: . . . . O.O That was unexpected! . . . . Sasuke, don’t waste clothing. . . . Hopefully really good, Naruto. . . . Ooh, mean. =) . . . . (Hey, you forgot to capitalize Naruto’s name a couple of times.) . . . . “Kyuubi’s chakra flared momentarily.” Nice effect. (I wonder if that’ll be significant later.) . . . . O.O O.O O.O HAAAAAAWWWWT and CYUUUUUUUUTE!!! =DDDDD I liiiiiiike it!! =DDD

I thought it was a good one! =D . . . . Oh, very funny, Itachi. 9_9

Chapter 27: “Is that a hickie in the shape of [. . .]” How the hell did you do that, Itachi? õ_ô . . . . Ohhhhhh, I loved 347! That was one of the awesomest chapters ever! XDDDDD . . . OMG, I totally missed Sakura’s nosebleed! O.O XD . . . . You weren’t imagining it, TW. Sasuke did soften his expression a little when he saw that. ^_^ . . . . Itachi, don’t kill TW. It’s not her fault that your very creator decided to show the world the image of Sasuke and Sai gettin’ ready for it. (I’m outta here. *ZOOM!*)

Sasuke knows some medical jutsu or something? . . . . “Kyuubi whacked him mentally with a tail,” Lol. XD . . . . Uh-oh, I know what Kyuubi’s up to. (Jerk. Tell Naruto.) . . . . Nice response, Naruto. “Good.” ^_^ . . . . Excellent dialogue. ^_^ . . . . Cut the crap, Sasuke. She’s your friend, dammit.
Sasuke’s “playing with his hair.” Who’s hair? His or Naruto’s? . . . . Oy, death by embarrassment. Thank God, they’re not surprising me by bowing like that. . . . I like the way Naruto and Sasuke react to it: Naruto’s cool with it, and Sasuke’s just cold.
Jeez. Poor guy. ó_ò . . . . If I recall correctly, this fic has Mpreg in it. Okay, fine. But Kyuubi doing it deliberately and not telling? I don’t approve of that. It’s not fair. Naruto deserves to know. . . . Shit, don’t count your chickens, Naruto! õ_õ

Hey, Itachi, you never answered her question.

Chapter 28: Ahahahaha, NaruIta Mpreg, seriously? XD

Ahahaha, “You’re such a wife.” Good one, Naruto! XDDD . . . . Is that shirt real? Cuz I like the line on it. ^^ . . . . Lol, and I love Sasuke’s belated reaction. XD And I totally agree with Naruto’s parting line. ^^
Lol, Sasuke PMSing. XD . . . . Boy, that must be frustrating when the doctor only tells you something’s up but they won’t tell you what.
“She smiled?” Why’d she smile? . . . . Interesting, Kyuubi’s explanation about it being both a reward and a punishment. . . . “Thanks.” Seriously or sarcastic? . . . . “As long as he takes it easy.” Better said than done. Good luck with that, guys. . . . What’re “prenatal vitamins?” Are they for girls only? Because they’d probably have to monkey around with them to produce ones for guys if so.
That’s some conclusion you’ve jumped to, Naruto. He’s just in shock (sort of). . . . I wonder what the gender will be. (Don’t tell me, I wanna find out.) . . . . I wonder how they’re going to get the baby out. . . . I hope everyone takes this well and doesn’t make it hard for them.

Love your entrance, Itachi. XD . . . . I think it’s because there was a pornographic anime called Cream Lemon or something like that, and my guess is people probably said stuff like “It’s Cream Lemon-esque stuff” or something like that. So it got shortened to “lemon.” That’s what I’ve looked up on the ‘net, I don’t know if that’s exactly true or not. (I’ve never seen that show or read that manga, and I don’t really want to.)

Chapter 29: “Syndrome?” I thought it just stood for “Stress.” õ_ô

Not much to say about the first scene, except that the whole thing was cute. ^_^
That’s a great line: “You work too hard, Iruka.” (Can’t bring myself to repeat the nickname.) . . . . I wonder if Iruka’s going to freak out enough to give himself an ulcer. . . . (*snort*) Love how Naruto broke it to him. XD . . . . And I love the way everybody responded. . . . Give the man a minute, Naruto, he’s gotta digest all this. . . . How does Naruto feel about not having any missions? And what’s Sasuke going to do? . . . . Awwww! :heart: . . . . Oooh, I never thought of the whole parent/spouse possession thing going on between Sasuke and Iruka. That should be cool to see.
Err, I think you should add a “said Naruto” after “I’m pregnant.” Otherwise it looks like Chouji’s talking. (*sweat*) (We all know it’s Naruto talking, but still.) . . . . (*snort*) Good question, Sakura. XD . . . No way! Naruto, you’re kidding?! O.O . . . . Love Sakura’s visualization. XD . . . . Sakura’s got a good point, guys. Plus, it’d be better if you guys were the ones to tell everyone rather than have some gossip you might’ve told it to earlier (*glares suspiciously around for Ino*) spread it like wildfire. . . . Kinda sad how Lee’s moving away. Why, I ask again, did you come up with such strange pairings?? ó_ò
Oh boy, this should be entertaining. (*does a head-count*) 30 people accounted for (if Akamaru’s in there, 31). . . . Well. They all took that rather well. I probably would’ve stood there and blinked like an idiot forever, trying to digest the possibility. (Shikamaru’s reaction was my favorite. XD)
Oooh, he’s gonna propose! (*squeal*) >w< .

(*blinks*) That’s the shortest A/N I’ve heard from you guys. (I think.)

Chapter 30: Nice wording of the Warning, Itachi. Or Sai. Or whoever did it. (*sweat*)
Nicely done, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Love the ring, too. I like yin/yang. ^_^
Ooh, nice opening to this scene. . . . And a nice scene all the way through. =)
Boy, I’d love to see that wedding! =D (I wonder how they’re going to work out the name-issue.)
Haha, too bad, Kakashi. ^^ (He must not mind it too badly, otherwise he’d be out of there in a flash. Cuz if he’s using his hands to write, they gotta be free and that should be enough to escape if he really wanted to.) . . . . Aha. That’s why. A good threat’ll do it.
Heh. Poor Ino wants in and she’s not part of it. ^^
Ahaha, Sasuke’s all “RAWR.” XDD
(*snort*) Love the effect of the head-banging immensely Really clever. XDD . . . . Relax, Sasuke. Just don’t overdo it. (He reminds me of me sometimes.)

Huh! I never realized that! That’s cool! My guess is the sky might be reddish, but maybe the moon is still out? I dunno. Sounds a little farfetched to me, but that’s my guess. What fic was that, by the way? . . . . Good God, this A/N is going on forever! o_o . . . . I like Juugo, by the way. He’s probably my favorite out of that trio. I’m really curious about Karin, though. She’s got mystery about her.

Chapter 21: Yeah, that did surprise me! o_o . . . . You gonna share the pictures, TW? XD

Ohhh, I’ll just betcha Gaara’s going to notice the absence of the Curse Seal before Neji does. ^^ . . . . HAH! Knew it! ^_^ . . . . “Raised lines?” I never thought of that. . . . Awww! So cute! :heart:
“Smaller flames that could burn through a six-inch solid steel door.” (*sweat*) And those are the smaller flames. O_O; . . . . Ahahahaha! XDDD Sasuke’s reaction. ^^
XDD Love how Sasuke reacted, and what he did to Naruto. XDD . . . . (*giggle*) Kinda funny picturing Sasuke doing that, but it’s not that farfetched either. ^^
Oh jeez, Sai! XD . . . . Love Sasuke’s reaction and reprimand. XD . . . . Love the line: “Sasuke let go of Sai with a snarled, ‘Don’t touch him,’ and went to stand next to Naruto.” . . . . “An owl-masked ANBU.” What must that mask look like, I wonder? . . . . I wonder if Naruto and/or Sasuke will figure out that it’s Iruka.

No, I had no clue about the ANBU this time. Should’ve seen it coming, though. ^^;