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Chapter 3: (*blinks*) Itachi . . . put your cloak back on. -_-

Never would’ve thought Sasuke’d be the one to do that first. (Maybe in retaliation to Naruto, though.) . . . . Aww, man, that’s sad. ó_ò . . . . Makes sense about Naruto being ignored, but still, would they be willing to skip out on a bill? . . . . Yay, you’ve got some good friends, there, Naruto. They love you, man. (So do I. ^_^) . . . . I wonder who’s gonna get top eventually. (>_>) . . . . JEEZUS!! They hate him that much?! õ_ô (Seems a little over-the-top to me.) . . . . Oh, come on. The bathroom being like that? A little too much, I think! (*sweat*) How the heck can anybody build something like that? I mean, why would they? õ_ô . . . . Yeesh. Like I said, over-the-top. -_-; And how is it that instant ramen survives? I mean, couldn’t the lid break or something? . . . . Oh boy, cuteness. Hey, what happened to starting subtle? Okay, he started subtle, but it moved along this quickly?? (*sigh*) I was kinda hoping things would take a little while before reaching this point. . . . Wow. That was . . . abrupt. ô_ô

Chapter 4: Heh. Itachi’s also touchy about touchy-feelie stuff. Cute. Must run in the family. ^^

That’s . . . a pretty big group. ô_ô . . . . That’ll be quite some commitment. Worth it, but still a big one. The question is, are they willing to live for a while on only ramen? . . . . Heh, only Chouji’s dubious. ^^ . . . . This is gonna be a humorous story, isn’t it? (*wary*)
(*snort*) Kyuubi. X3 . . . . Fox has got a point, Naruto. You do deserve to be courted. . . . Err, you got some letters mixed up in “Otouto.” It came out as “otouot.” ^^; . . . . Oh, good! Some rocks in the road! =D
Heh. “Like most Uchihas he’s plagued with insomnia.” So typical, I love it! X3 . . . . Dude. He’s a guy, Sasuke. Treat him like one. -_- . . . . Oh yeah. In hindsight, you mentioned that the group Sakura got together included Team Kakashi. Does that include Sasuke and Naruto? Cuz if they were there, they hardly reacted at all to anything. I think you could’ve been a little more explicit on the group (maybe).
It’s amazing what some people will do to express their hate. What a waste of energy. At least at another restaurant, if they ignored him, he could get away with giving his friends free meals. . . . Heheheh, good one, Chouji.

Chapter 5: “I’m pleased. I don’t do happy.” XDDDD . . . . So is Sai another favorite? . . . . Oh, please make him someone’s uke! His brother’s, most likely! =DDD

Uh-oh. I think I know where this title’s going to lead. >_>
“Created a blade out of water.” So has he developed an affinity with water, then? . . . . Ah, should’ve known that Sai’s appearance in the A/N would’ve been a foreshadowing of his appearance in the story. ^_^ I wonder if there’s a little rival-thing between him and Sasuke in this fic. . . . Yup. Goodie. ^^ . . . . Whatever you do, Sasuke, don’t get caught in a dumb situation unless it’s absolutely worth it.
Oh my. No subtlety, Sai. Actually I’m wondering if Sai’s really interested in Naruto, or if he’s just doing it to aggravate Sasuke. And yeah, I kinda knew that about the Uchihas. . . . Huh. I didn’t actually expect my question to get answered. Interesting. ô_ô . . . . “Subtly flirting with you?” Bullshit, Sai. XD . . . . (*giggle*) Love the paragraph, “Sai just smiled and moved in for [. . .] ‘Come with me dobe.’” ^^ . . . . “Sasuke carefully led Naruto to the surprise he had spent so much time planning.” For some reason, that puts worry in my mind. õ_o . . . . That should look interesting, a couple of guys out on a picnic on the Hokage Monument’s head. ^_^ . . . . That’s funny. Sasuke said very blatantly that he can’t cook for shit. X3 . . . . “You’re such a virgin.” XD You and me, Naruto, you and me. XDD . . . . I like how Sasuke admits he’s jealous. . . . What happened to making him work for it, Naruto? . . . . (*snicker*) It looks like things are okay, and then, “Sasuke went home to plot revenge on Sai.” It ain’t over yet! ^^

just to let you know...
I love this story, mostly the
conversations you have with
charters, before and after.

I LOVE YOUR STORY. I know it's not much but thats all that needs to be said.

KAWAII!! more onegai!! Watashi no suki desu, no!!

I ran a cross this story onice before, and liked it, but when I never saw an update to it, I forgot about it. But a copule a day ago I found you on someones fav auther list. I checked it out, and found this story again, and about squiled in dlight when I was that this story not only contuing, bit had been update to "50" chapters. I fliped. I'v spent three days liveing and breathing this story. I was late for work one moreing cause I lost track of the time reading it. It is really good. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see where you tack this story now. Good Work! ^__^

what up I love ur fic. I like how u explain the story behind the orange sout. I love the story with all of the twists and i think out of all the fics i have read u paint a perfect picture of the love between naruto and sauske along with the kakashi and iruka one as well. I love how u have written thins story and i would apreciatit if u could notify me if there is a new chapter and of any other fics u are going to release thank u and keep on writen this good stuff later.

Hi, oke it took me 3 days to read all the chappies. I think this is a GREAT story *starts bowing*. I just wanted to ad that even though the side pairings are not the usual ones, I think it was brilliantly thought of. Somehow they seem to work just fine. I really don't know anymore to say except: GREAT story!!!!!!!!

Oh and a little word to Itachi:

Stop your bitching. T.W. writes great stories and you know that too. And if she wasn't so "insane" you wouldn't get to do all the fun stuff with Sai. *sticks tongue out to Itachi*

Here maybe this will help get Itachi to pipe down *hands T.W. a Itachi puppet and a load of needles*.

i have followed your story please dont stop writing it i love it if you do end it write a sequal