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i don't why you would want to rewrite the last chapter because i thought it was blazin. i am so sad this story is winding down. at the funeral i'll be the one with all nack and red flowers on my hat. i can't wait to see the next chapter.

Please don't rewrite, I like this chapter. I think the bloodline and the summoning are cool. What is Hikari going to be able to do? Will Mikomi get left behind because she is not an Uzamaki-Uchiha or because she an Uchiha will she just stubbornly keep up with cousins? Can't wait to see what happens down the road.

hey there! if it isn't too much trouble, and not breaching confidentiality or anything, could you e-mail me the name of the author you mentioned? i wanted to offer some support. or if you don't feel comfortable giving me the e-mail address, please pass the message on to that person. i can't write fiction so am more than willing to give props to those who can and do.

i agree about there are some awesome stories out there that are just hanging, and it's probably because they got busy or were discouraged. example; there was a fic called kittychaos in kohona that was absolutely the bomb! but not only was it not finished, it's completely GONE!!! i can't remember the author but if it's who you mentioned, please pass on my regards. and even if it's not, please pass them on anyway. thanx!

This is one of my all time favorite stories! Poor Naruto and Sasuke, 1 fox child, 1 snake child, and 2 girls that probably has the maynglo(SP) thing in the eyes. Needless to say, the village will be well protected from now on. I'll be sorry to see this one end.

funny and awesome naru-chan's kids hav kyuubi bloodlines cant wait to see wat their skills will be and kana is so lovable ^_^. update soon adn great job

You don't need to re-write this chappie. Do your author thing and wrap it up as you see fit.
I have enjoyed all of your works and I look forward to the future.
Let me know if...when you're ready to co-write a fic with me.

Hugs, kisses and all of the NaruSasu chibis running amock,
>X<

THIS IS ENDING SOON!? Nooooooooo, whyy, I'm enjoying this! At least tell me Naruto and Sasuke are going to go at it one more time before this ends? They haven't done anything in awhile. And please tell me we get a years later Epiloge?

woot!

Love ya! So please update soon!

I think you got one or two mistakes in there, basically a "needs a space between the words" and I think there should have been a "don't" instead of a "do" type of situation, but other than that, I think it looks good! The chapter came out good despite you not quite happy with it and I look forward to more.

It took me two days to read this and now there is no more chapters. I think I'm gonna cry, please update soon.