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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Gwyllion
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a load of action and the cliffie got me on teh edge of my seat! You wrote the action scene really well. As a comic book artist, I can def picture these in panels. Well done! Can't wait to read more from you. :D
person kinai26
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi T.W.

I love this story... it´s so exiting and extremly well written - Thank you for writing it XD I just can´t stop reading it :D

About the Authors rant.
I´ve been flamed for my writing style too, and I almost felt like quitting too. Thankfully I have a lot of sweet and very loving readers, who got me back into the mood to go on writing.

I agree with you on the last note: If you don´t have anything nice to say... then don´t say anything at all.

I hope that you friend will begin to write again soon, because the more writers - the merrier XD
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always loved this story XD
person Sarah
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, your writing skills are amazing. i wish you updated more, but i'm happy that you do at least update. keep up the amazing work :]
person Melony
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering for a while now... You make it sound so great when you put Sai and Itachi and Kyuubi together... why don't you write a story on them together? It would be so great if you would... xD I wish I could write like you... x)
person Melony
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am finally onto chapter 49 and you mean to tell me this isn't finished... ARGH!!!... why have you not finished yet I really want the ending... sniff... I'm so sad... Please update as soon as you can!
person inumoon3
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Kana's an official ninja now!!! Woo Hoo! And I'm so happy Kaji's okay! Now what's up with Arashi?!?! Update soon!!!!
person Xenobia
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to kill me again?

*sighs*

Let me guess...I have to wait right? Let me know when you update.

Mumbling, grumbling NaruSasu,
>X<
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!1!!!!11!!!!! WHAT A TERRIBLE CLIFFY!!! plz update soon... i wuv all of yours stories...
person Dynamo
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOP WOOP! finally an update! where've u been man? but seriously GREAT chapter, with mizuki coming back and kana finally getting trust from sasuke. i cannot WAIT to find out whats up with arashi. update now! >.<