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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this has taken me a few days but im finally finished with it! it was great! is there a sequel? and the names of the pets were from fruits basket i think. i loved reading about itachi and sai and i though itachi got really uh creative there at the end. lol
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah! this was so fantastic, that i read ALL of it in ONE night! this was a great story, your really advancing in your writing skills. ^.^ keep up the fab. work!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The pets names came from Fruits Basket (even if the snake is Ayame, not Aya).
That "Fearsome Foursome" is kinda cool (and appropriate) to the kids.
Sequel?
That "Fearsome Foursome" is kinda cool (and appropriate) to the kids.
Sequel?
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He he i loved it in the end. the next generation of shinobis and all so simular, great ending. :)
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great Christmas gift! Thank you TW!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe it's been this long since I've been reading this fic!
I'm kind of sad it's over, but it's still amazing how far it's come from the start.
Sequel? Haha.
Oh, and the pet's names were after the characters in Fruits Basket. =]
I'm kind of sad it's over, but it's still amazing how far it's come from the start.
Sequel? Haha.
Oh, and the pet's names were after the characters in Fruits Basket. =]
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Realizes she wasn't signed in for her review- Wow, I'm stupid.
-Spams your review page then-
<3's for Why Orange?
<3 <3 <3
-Spams your review page then-
<3's for Why Orange?
<3 <3 <3
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you.
I wondered where you're hiding.
thank you for this story.
I have been reading it for so long and I love the
ending.
I wondered where you're hiding.
thank you for this story.
I have been reading it for so long and I love the
ending.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, no lemon? ó_ò ____ I’m loving this dialogue. =D
Chapter 54: Owch. >.< ____ It’s probably a little late for criticism, but I don’t think I’ve mentioned it before in this fic: “The Uchiha” and “the blond” are . . . not the best idea in my opinion. I know, I know, punch me, my opinion isn’t worth shit. u.u But, ah, it’s . . . kind of, erm . . . cheap? An easy habit to fall into. And I’ve only recently got an aggravation spot for them. The titles are better suited to when we’re not real familiar with the characters. Okay. Sorry for the crit. Had to mention it. ;__; ____ LOL, “Oh did one of them get you there too?” >3
Chakra control already? o.O Wow. ____ D’aww, cute, Naruto taking a page out of Iruka’s book. ^^ ____ Hee-hee (*points at Sai*) ^^ Sai’s gonna be irked at you, TW.
Great, it’s the Terrible Twos. -_-; ____ Hah! Good one, Naruto. (*smirk*) ____ Weird. I’m biased: When Naruto did it, I like it. Hearing that it was a tip from Sakura seems appropriate, but I don’t like it as much. =\ ____ If they do have sex again, I hope Naruto won’t get pregnant again; they’ve got enough kids. He hasn’t talked to Kyuubi much lately, has he? ____ “Right, I’m gone. Bye.” ^^ ____ Hah! “Getting Sasuke to behave when he’s horny is much more difficult than getting toddlers to stop biting.” Lots of testosterone running high, I take it. ^^
“The fearsome foursome?” XD ____ I wonder why Mikomi’s so clingy? ____ I don’t remember Kana. õ.ô ____ Interesting. Naruto’s line, “Uh-huh and the first time I have to clean out a cage or something like that without a kid in sight because someone's forgotten to do it, guess who I'll be making do it instead,” sounds more like something Sasuke would say.
Cool how Kaji liked the snake. He’s the one who ended up summoning one, isn’t he? I don’t know what kind of food corn snakes eat, but I hope it’s not birds. (*shiver*) ____ An albino pine marten? That’s original. Interesting. Oh, wait. . . . Pine martens and weasels are in a similar family, aren’t they? Huh . . . Very interesting. . . . Must be Itachi reincarnated. =) That’s cute. (Probably my favorite part of the story.) ____ Mm, another thing I don’t think I’ve mentioned and is probably rather pointless now: “Aniki”. For some reason, I have a hard time finding that word in the anime and manga. I always get “nii-san”. I think I heard Sasuke say it when he was “dying” during the Haku business . . . but that was indirect. ____ “Wind,” eh? I’m not sure but I think that might also have something to do with Itachi’s name. At least, that’s what a friend of mine told me.
What the heck. Why doesn’t it like Sasuke? Seems a little much if it’s Fate. ____ Kureno the parakeet. You’ve read Fruits Basket, haven’t you? And if you haven’t, then obviously I’m missing some kind of connection. Or it could just be coincidence. ^^; ____ Never mind! It is Fruits Basket! ____ LOL, Sasuke snarling, “What,” at the animal. XD ____ Dude, Naruto, it’s not funny. I don’t care what the excuse is; it’s gotta learn not to do that. ____ Screw the puppy eyes and neuter the thing, or give a good enough threat to get it to quit.
Almost lost the medic? Jeez, what the hell was he doing? õ.ô ____ I wonder what Arashi’s nightmare was about.
(*snicker*) Naruto in pissed-off-Iruka mode. ^^ And I loved his line: “Alright, which one of you attacked the cinnamon buns.” ^^ ____ Bad idea, Naruto. I don’t trust that marten. If it thinks it’ll aggravate Sasuke, it’ll do it. ____ Interesting line: “I know you are, because you got caught.” Cold, but probably true.
Cute. I wonder what Sasuke would think if he saw that interaction.
Oy, why’d you capitalize the “r” in “Rasengan” but not in any of Sasuke’s techniques? =( ____ “Wind Bind Jutsu?” Cool.
What book? ____ Oh man, Hikari’s like me: pacing around and muttering to herself. I do that all the time. =) ____ Having a party, eh? Never heard that one before, though I probably should’ve. =)
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(*snicker*) You feel honored, Kakashi? ____ LOL, “Iruka! Help!” >D ____ “Sasuke and Naruto will kill me, after turning me into a woman.” For a second there, I had no idea what he was talking about; “why the woman part?” I was thinking. Then I figured it out. ^^;;; ____ Haha, Iruka’s answered that one before! XD I honestly can’t imagine. I would’ve thought kids’d be too intimidated by him, considering his temper. That’s more of the thing kids would ask their parents, isn’t it? ____ LOL about Naruto “murmuring a hallelujah”. XD ____ Aww, that’s sweet, that part with Mikomi wanting reassurance. ____ Boy, that’s a tricky question. ____ This has got to be tough on Sasuke. ____ That’s cute, how he got a picture for her.
Kinda young for the Academy these days, aren’t they? Last I heard, the usual age was 7. ____ Team 4, eh? ____ Interesting detail about Hyuuga Hisoka. Watanabe Yukiko sounds creepily like Sakura except for the crush thing (maybe). (And why do I feel like I’ve heard that name somewhere before?) And . . . boy, that’s creepy how this team echoes the old Team 7. I like how their appearances a somewhat different, though. As for the last kid, “his manner reminded Naruto of a stray dog that was trying to decide if the human meant well or harm,” I’m wondering why. What are his issues? ____ LOL, love Naruto’s introduction. ^_^ I really liked the “My current goal” and “My ultimate goal.” ____ That’s interesting, bird watching and fishing. Cool. ____ Well, so far, they all sound like healthy goals. Let’s hope they stay that way. ____ Hehehe, echoing Kakashi, slightly, except he’s giving them a slight tip about working together.
“SOL?” I just tried looking it up. The definitions don’t make sense in this context, and there are a ton of acronyms. Which one were you referring to? õ_ô ____ LOL, “You suck, sensei.” ^^ ____ LOL, “Dead-last my ass.” ^^
Clever. I like how Naruto’s combining Kakashi’s lessons. ____ Hehehe, “Okay, that’s a seriously gross image.” ____ I like Naruto’s honesty (I think it’s honesty) about his methods of instructing the team. ____ Heheh, Sasuke. ____ That’s a nice ending! =)
COOKIES!! And I caught that use of “Sohma” when Yukiko mentioned her rival.
Chapter 54: Owch. >.< ____ It’s probably a little late for criticism, but I don’t think I’ve mentioned it before in this fic: “The Uchiha” and “the blond” are . . . not the best idea in my opinion. I know, I know, punch me, my opinion isn’t worth shit. u.u But, ah, it’s . . . kind of, erm . . . cheap? An easy habit to fall into. And I’ve only recently got an aggravation spot for them. The titles are better suited to when we’re not real familiar with the characters. Okay. Sorry for the crit. Had to mention it. ;__; ____ LOL, “Oh did one of them get you there too?” >3
Chakra control already? o.O Wow. ____ D’aww, cute, Naruto taking a page out of Iruka’s book. ^^ ____ Hee-hee (*points at Sai*) ^^ Sai’s gonna be irked at you, TW.
Great, it’s the Terrible Twos. -_-; ____ Hah! Good one, Naruto. (*smirk*) ____ Weird. I’m biased: When Naruto did it, I like it. Hearing that it was a tip from Sakura seems appropriate, but I don’t like it as much. =\ ____ If they do have sex again, I hope Naruto won’t get pregnant again; they’ve got enough kids. He hasn’t talked to Kyuubi much lately, has he? ____ “Right, I’m gone. Bye.” ^^ ____ Hah! “Getting Sasuke to behave when he’s horny is much more difficult than getting toddlers to stop biting.” Lots of testosterone running high, I take it. ^^
“The fearsome foursome?” XD ____ I wonder why Mikomi’s so clingy? ____ I don’t remember Kana. õ.ô ____ Interesting. Naruto’s line, “Uh-huh and the first time I have to clean out a cage or something like that without a kid in sight because someone's forgotten to do it, guess who I'll be making do it instead,” sounds more like something Sasuke would say.
Cool how Kaji liked the snake. He’s the one who ended up summoning one, isn’t he? I don’t know what kind of food corn snakes eat, but I hope it’s not birds. (*shiver*) ____ An albino pine marten? That’s original. Interesting. Oh, wait. . . . Pine martens and weasels are in a similar family, aren’t they? Huh . . . Very interesting. . . . Must be Itachi reincarnated. =) That’s cute. (Probably my favorite part of the story.) ____ Mm, another thing I don’t think I’ve mentioned and is probably rather pointless now: “Aniki”. For some reason, I have a hard time finding that word in the anime and manga. I always get “nii-san”. I think I heard Sasuke say it when he was “dying” during the Haku business . . . but that was indirect. ____ “Wind,” eh? I’m not sure but I think that might also have something to do with Itachi’s name. At least, that’s what a friend of mine told me.
What the heck. Why doesn’t it like Sasuke? Seems a little much if it’s Fate. ____ Kureno the parakeet. You’ve read Fruits Basket, haven’t you? And if you haven’t, then obviously I’m missing some kind of connection. Or it could just be coincidence. ^^; ____ Never mind! It is Fruits Basket! ____ LOL, Sasuke snarling, “What,” at the animal. XD ____ Dude, Naruto, it’s not funny. I don’t care what the excuse is; it’s gotta learn not to do that. ____ Screw the puppy eyes and neuter the thing, or give a good enough threat to get it to quit.
Almost lost the medic? Jeez, what the hell was he doing? õ.ô ____ I wonder what Arashi’s nightmare was about.
(*snicker*) Naruto in pissed-off-Iruka mode. ^^ And I loved his line: “Alright, which one of you attacked the cinnamon buns.” ^^ ____ Bad idea, Naruto. I don’t trust that marten. If it thinks it’ll aggravate Sasuke, it’ll do it. ____ Interesting line: “I know you are, because you got caught.” Cold, but probably true.
Cute. I wonder what Sasuke would think if he saw that interaction.
Oy, why’d you capitalize the “r” in “Rasengan” but not in any of Sasuke’s techniques? =( ____ “Wind Bind Jutsu?” Cool.
What book? ____ Oh man, Hikari’s like me: pacing around and muttering to herself. I do that all the time. =) ____ Having a party, eh? Never heard that one before, though I probably should’ve. =)
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(*snicker*) You feel honored, Kakashi? ____ LOL, “Iruka! Help!” >D ____ “Sasuke and Naruto will kill me, after turning me into a woman.” For a second there, I had no idea what he was talking about; “why the woman part?” I was thinking. Then I figured it out. ^^;;; ____ Haha, Iruka’s answered that one before! XD I honestly can’t imagine. I would’ve thought kids’d be too intimidated by him, considering his temper. That’s more of the thing kids would ask their parents, isn’t it? ____ LOL about Naruto “murmuring a hallelujah”. XD ____ Aww, that’s sweet, that part with Mikomi wanting reassurance. ____ Boy, that’s a tricky question. ____ This has got to be tough on Sasuke. ____ That’s cute, how he got a picture for her.
Kinda young for the Academy these days, aren’t they? Last I heard, the usual age was 7. ____ Team 4, eh? ____ Interesting detail about Hyuuga Hisoka. Watanabe Yukiko sounds creepily like Sakura except for the crush thing (maybe). (And why do I feel like I’ve heard that name somewhere before?) And . . . boy, that’s creepy how this team echoes the old Team 7. I like how their appearances a somewhat different, though. As for the last kid, “his manner reminded Naruto of a stray dog that was trying to decide if the human meant well or harm,” I’m wondering why. What are his issues? ____ LOL, love Naruto’s introduction. ^_^ I really liked the “My current goal” and “My ultimate goal.” ____ That’s interesting, bird watching and fishing. Cool. ____ Well, so far, they all sound like healthy goals. Let’s hope they stay that way. ____ Hehehe, echoing Kakashi, slightly, except he’s giving them a slight tip about working together.
“SOL?” I just tried looking it up. The definitions don’t make sense in this context, and there are a ton of acronyms. Which one were you referring to? õ_ô ____ LOL, “You suck, sensei.” ^^ ____ LOL, “Dead-last my ass.” ^^
Clever. I like how Naruto’s combining Kakashi’s lessons. ____ Hehehe, “Okay, that’s a seriously gross image.” ____ I like Naruto’s honesty (I think it’s honesty) about his methods of instructing the team. ____ Heheh, Sasuke. ____ That’s a nice ending! =)
COOKIES!! And I caught that use of “Sohma” when Yukiko mentioned her rival.