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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Xenobia
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the names...they are going to be perfect.

Be happy...at least your muse is still talking to you. I think mine has left the country. I need something to get me jump started so she'll come back soon. I have a piece that has started but I keep hitting this huge wall of writer's block.

Oh well...*sighs*

Snocones, bubblegum and sleepless nights,
-X-

person Chibi
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. Itachi had a kid... O.o, but still a very good story! I've been reading it everytime you update! I love it so much! Please update soon!
person Xenobia
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh good grief! I loved the baby shower and the weird food cravings but you had to send Sasuke on an important mission right before Naru-chan gives birth? It's just not right...almost wrong, kinda. I mean, I understand that Sasuke is doing it to protect his family but what if something (Kami-sama forbid) happens and Sasuke isn't there for Naru-chan? Promise me that nothing uber-bad happens to Naru-chan or I will plan a road trip to get your rear-end.

Since you let your fans at ff.net help you with the shower gifts, why not let the aff.net peeps help with the baby names. I have a couple in mind and I'll shoot you and EM with them and what them mean.

Plushies and diapers and more weird food cravings,
-X-
person LFO
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's nice to see that there isn't constant sex scenes for a change. You know, I really have to thank you. If it wasn't for this amazing story, I wouldn't have tried to broaden my horizons and go to FF net to the Naruto section. I wouldn't have read some amazing smut along with some amazing fluff, and I would have never moved on to the Kingdom Hearts section of which I am so obsessed with. So, thank you, for being an awesome writer, and also for being able to push me to do new things. Continue to write good stories, and continue to dazzle people with your writing skills. If you do that, I'm sure that you can achieve happiness in life.
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok didnt see that coming lol. itachi a daddy and went out with a bang, kinda cool. now naru/sasu got a new daughter to add to their clan cant wait to read more and find out if the team finds that guy before he reaches naruto. update soon XD
person kati
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O naruto is emotional! but i suppose he is preggers *snicker* anyway, sasuke better come back!! Cool fic xx
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i wasn't expecting that last shocker! So Itachi had a baby huh. That house is gonna be full of kids. Hopefully Sasuke will be alright to enjoy it all! Good chap.
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting twist. I have a bad feeling about splitting up Sasuke and Naruto it always leads to disaster.
person cherryenchanted
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yey!Another 2 new chapters, thanks!!!>>waiting for the next chapter<
person RSlover
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoo man talk about a bummer
Sasuke has to leave Naruto when he's so close to giving birth
I absolutely love this fiction
I hope sasuke and the others find that guy and destroy him
Are you going to have sasuke show up when Naruto is in labor??? that would be so cool
especially if it becomes a surprise for Naruto and the others ^_^
Keep up the good work, you're doin great ^_^
Keep Sasuke alive!!!!! =D =D
And please update soon ^_^
JA"NE