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for Why Orange?

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person cynaga
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fabulous~!
person lilshu65
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
person emp78
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good thing there are four cribs. But you sent Sasuke after a man who wants to get rid of the Uchihas; don't let him get killed too. BTW, in the manga, Kabuto is seriously f***ed up. And you are right about everyone's haircolor. I liked Juugo's hair, but was surprised about Karin's (another Sasuke fan-girl...NO!!!). I don't think Tobi and Deidara have much of a chance of either beating or capturing Sasuke, but it might be close.
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I leave the comp alone for 3 days to hang out with friends, and everyone updates! lol. Should have known. Man, I can't believe Sasuke is leave Naruto alone pregnant with 3 babies and taking care of another baby. He's just lucky it's a life or death situation. lol. Update soon!


schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How will naruto give the whole "your never touching me agian you pig" speech wile crushing his hand like a walnut as he's goeing though labor if sauske is gone? Anyways good story.
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. i think that i told you this before but i love your story and where it is going. but don't you dare think about killing sasuke, naruto, or any children. i will change my hold veiw ona fic. make it great. i am love it. i hate good stories with bad endings so make this a good one.
person ValiumofVitium
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I have followed this story. From Chapter 3, oh so long ago, and I have yet to review. Seeing as how we've (Meaning me, myself, and I) stuck on through so many chapters, grace periods, and update slumps- We figured it was time for a review. I adore how you've portrayed Naruto and Sasuke as seperately thinking entities as opposed to the stereotypical base of their characters. The brooding avenger and the delightful dunce. It's nice to see an author put so much structure into a fanfiction, when you really think you have your work cut out for you, and you're actually just working harder to keep the character true to form. I give you quite a huge thumbs up for this story, and look forward to seeing it finished. If you want to reply to me, I'm afraid I don't have an email account to offer, but I'll be here when the next update comes. Thanks for great entertainment.
- Valium
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another awsome chapter... cant wait for the next one... still no word on the itasai pics...
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I reveiwed this story on ff.net, but I'm still going to reiew here as well.

LOVED IT!!!!! That scene with Sakura and Naruto shopping was great! Looks like Sakura is a yaoifan!!! Just like in the Manga chapter 347!!! Theres a yaoi scene with Sai and Sasuke..hehe Sakura was praticlly foaming at the mouth, just like in your fic!!!lol! Update soon!
person Gwyllion
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!....What an excellent long fic!!! I LOVE your sasunaru here! So adorable!! I can't wait to read your next update! Please keep up the great work! :D